The document summarizes two meetings with a client to improve a script. In the first meeting, the client requested that scene headings be made more professional, dialogue be centralized, and a section of dialogue involving Tom in the woods be adjusted for style. In the second meeting, the client suggested clarifying a part where a phone wasn't working and making the dialogue in the last section more realistic. Both meetings resulted in requested changes being made to further improve the script.

1. Meeting#1 17/12/18
Aftermeetingwithmyclienttheyhave toldme thatIneedtochange the scene headingstolook
more professional whichIhave nowchangedtomake it lookbetter.Iwas alsotoldthat I neededto
centralise the dialogue forthe same reasonsandI have alsocompletedthis.FinallyIgottoldthat I
neededtolookatthe dialogue of acertainsectionof myscript beingthe partwhere Tom isinthe
woodso that itis more suitedforthe style of myscript whichI have now completed.
Meeting#2 8/01/19
Aftermakingthe original improvementsfromthe firstdraftIhad anothermeetingwiththe clientto
see if there wasany othertweaksIcouldmake to improve myscript.The first thingIwas toldto look
at was the part of myfilmwhere the phone isn’tworking.Ihave now changeditso itis clearto the
audience whatisgoingonas it saysthat the message failstosend.Ialsogottoldto make the overall
dialogue of the lastsectionmore realisticasitwasn’tsomethingthatpeople would actuallychange
whichI have nowdone.