The client was generally pleased with the initial draft of the script but suggested adding scene numbers to make production easier and including contact information on the first page. The writer made these changes and later emailed the final draft to the client, asking for further feedback and clarification on dialogue in scene 10.

1. CLIENT FEEDBACK
06/12/2019
I gave my first draft of the script to my client to read, after which we had a meeting to discuss it and for them to provide some feedback. The
client was generally pleased with the initial draft and didn’t have too many suggestions. They suggested I added in scene numbers to make
production easier as cast orcrew could be instructed to turn to a specific scene. Additionally, they said a name, email and address would be
necessary on the first page. I made changes to my script according to this feedback, adding in scene numbers and adding my name, email and
address.
08/01/2020
With my final draft of my
script completed, I emailed it
over to the client asking for
further feedback and
questioning on a specific
aspect of the script (dialogue
in scene 10). On the right is
this email correspondence: