The client provided feedback on improving the script structure at their first meeting, recommending adding a school address, scene numbers before descriptions, splitting descriptions until a character enters, removing brackets from directions and putting them to the left, and including character emotions next to names with less descriptive detail. At the second meeting, the client said scene 2's description needed shortening to not explain before dialogue and scene 4's description and a phone call by Billy needed clarification through brackets.

1. Client Feedback
First meeting – 4/12/18
In myfirstmeetingwiththe clienttheytoldme thattoimprove myscriptI needto adda school
address andadd scene numbers before the scene description.Ialsoneedtosplitthe description
until a character enters.The clientalsotoldme thatI neednobracketson directionsandtheyneed
to be put to the left.Tofurtherimprove the structure of my scriptI alsoneedtoput the emotions of
the character nextto character name.Finally,Ineedto include lessdetail inthe scene description to
make it easiertounderstand
Second Meeting – 10/12/18
My secondmeetingwiththe clientwentwell the onlythingsIneededtoadjustwastoshortenthe
scene 2 description tomake sure I donot explainwhathashappenedbefore the dialogue does.
FinallyIalsoneedtoshortenmyscene 4 descriptionandexplainthatBillyismakingaphone call,
thenI justneedto put textmessage inbrackets nexttoJess’ text.