BUSINESS WRITING & PROPER
EMAIL COMMUNICATION
10 TIPS
1. Less is more
• Make your point right away
• Make it professional
• Cut the “Fluff”
2. Be professional, not necessarily
formal
• We are not lawyers, we are also not frat brothers.
• No text language (LOL, emoticons, etc.)
• It is now public- would you want it read at your funeral?
3. Be specific
• Answer the 5 W’s (and H)
• Give them EXACTLY what they want
* If they ask for something, give it to them!
* Not what they want to hear, what they are asking for!
4. Know your audience
• Be aware of titles
• Bureaucrats: Be detailed - stick to the facts
• Know what you can say and to whom: if you are not
sure, do not say it!
5. What’s in it for them?
• It is not about you
• How does what you are saying affect them?
• How does what you are saying benefit them?
6. Call to action
• The purpose of the email is to accomplish something
• Make sure they know what you expect from the email
• Make sure they know the urgency (or understand your
sense of urgency)
7. Avoid jargon
• Don’t use a big word when a small word will do
• Using a large vocabulary does not show intelligence- it
shows you are TRYING to be so
8. Write Once, Check Twice
• Check for typos (run-on sentences, improper grammar)
• Check for spelling mistakes
• Have someone else look at it if necessary
9. WRITE ONCE, CHECK TWICE!
• Read it out loud
* Does it make sense?
* Does it say what you want it to?
• Give it a minute- try it again
* Especially if you are angry or worked up
10. Not a substitute for phone
• We build rapport over the phone
• We find out needs over the phone
• The customer/prospect is not going to give you an essay
or open up over email
Questions?

Business Writing & Proper Email Communication

  • 1.
    BUSINESS WRITING &PROPER EMAIL COMMUNICATION 10 TIPS
  • 2.
    1. Less ismore • Make your point right away • Make it professional • Cut the “Fluff”
  • 3.
    2. Be professional,not necessarily formal • We are not lawyers, we are also not frat brothers. • No text language (LOL, emoticons, etc.) • It is now public- would you want it read at your funeral?
  • 4.
    3. Be specific •Answer the 5 W’s (and H) • Give them EXACTLY what they want * If they ask for something, give it to them! * Not what they want to hear, what they are asking for!
  • 5.
    4. Know youraudience • Be aware of titles • Bureaucrats: Be detailed - stick to the facts • Know what you can say and to whom: if you are not sure, do not say it!
  • 6.
    5. What’s init for them? • It is not about you • How does what you are saying affect them? • How does what you are saying benefit them?
  • 7.
    6. Call toaction • The purpose of the email is to accomplish something • Make sure they know what you expect from the email • Make sure they know the urgency (or understand your sense of urgency)
  • 8.
    7. Avoid jargon •Don’t use a big word when a small word will do • Using a large vocabulary does not show intelligence- it shows you are TRYING to be so
  • 9.
    8. Write Once,Check Twice • Check for typos (run-on sentences, improper grammar) • Check for spelling mistakes • Have someone else look at it if necessary
  • 10.
    9. WRITE ONCE,CHECK TWICE! • Read it out loud * Does it make sense? * Does it say what you want it to? • Give it a minute- try it again * Especially if you are angry or worked up
  • 11.
    10. Not asubstitute for phone • We build rapport over the phone • We find out needs over the phone • The customer/prospect is not going to give you an essay or open up over email
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