The document provides tips for writing effective emails. Some key points include using clear and concise subject lines; including an appropriate greeting; using short paragraphs and concise language; properly formatting the email; keeping the message focused; using signatures; proofreading before sending; and using CC and BCC fields appropriately. The document also provides examples of "dos" such as being informative and courteous, and "don'ts" such as using all capital letters or abbreviations.

1. Writing Effective E-Mails - Some Tips 

15. Let's have a look at an example of 'bad' writing in a business email, and how to turn it into a perfect specimen. Business Email Version 1 Joan Doe, thanks for your interest in a trading with partnership Ray International. But we are mainly looking for trading partners in europe, so we are unsure about how to make the right fit with your offer at present. U can call me in a month to talk further about possibl deals.. later, robert ceo ray International

16. Lets fix this email message.............

17. And now also make some small hand edits Hi Joan Doe, Thank you for your interest in a trading with partnership Ray International. However, we are mainly looking for trading partners in Europe, so we are unsure about how to make the right fit with your offer at present. You can call me in a month to talk further about possible deals. I look forward to hearing from you, Thanks & Regards, Robert Neat CEO Ray International

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