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PITCH FEEDBACK 
FOR MY MUSIC MAGAZINE
WHICH INSTITUTION WOULD BEST SUIT MY 
MAGAZINE? 
Person 1 
Somebody with a big publishing background and has a lot of money would suit your magazine because of their 
knowledge in the industry and their contacts to big bands. As you are also targeting young adults big glossy 
modern product target young people. 
Person 2 
The bigger publication would suit your magazine because they can feature big names in your magazine and still 
stick to your genre however it might no suit your target audience because their age. 
Person 3 
The smaller publication would help you focus on your genre however if there is not much money going into it the 
target audience won't be as interested because it won't be
WHAT NAMES DO YOU FIND MOST SUITABLE FOR THE 
MAGAZINE? 
Person 1 
I like bass it gives an urban feel which reflects your genre. 
Person 2 
I think louder sounds to much like a pop magazine or for a younger target audience I would choose bass. 
Person 3 
Bass I'd the suitable choice as it is relevant to your genre of main having bass guitars and instruments and 
it is short and snappy like other magazines you see.
DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF HAVING UPBEAT ARTICLES 
OR WOULD YOU LIKE IT TO BE MORE FORMAL? 
Person 1 
I like the idea that it will be upbeat the articles however I think that it should have a more formal tone to it 
as this would change the magazine so it different to others. 
Person 2 
The target audience would suit a lively formal tone so somewhere in the middle this makes the audience 
engage as it would suit their older age. 
Person 3 
I like the more upbeat article as it would suit your genre however the target audience wouldn't suit as it is 
too young of an audience.
DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF BRIGHT VIBRANT COLOURS 
Person 1 
I like the idea however I don't think it would suit your genre I do think it would suit your target audience 
Person 2 
The bright colours would suit the audience however to bold for the genre 
Person 3 
The colours makes the magazine look modern which would appeal to the target audience. Yes I like the 
idea.
DO YOU THINK THERE IS COMPETITION WITH THIS 
MAGAZINE PROPOSAL? OR WILL THIS MAGAZINE 
BRING SOMETHING NEW? 
Person 1 
The competition would be bigger magazine that have a big name for the selfs this would be hard to stand 
out from however I think if you make the genre more formal there is a gap in the market. 
Person 2 
There is a chance to bring something new as their isn't many big magazine that suit that typical genre. The 
formal tone would suit your target audience. 
Person 3 
There is a danger with billboard magazine as it is very similar however you are targeting it at people with 
less money but keeping the classy parts of it this would make it stand out.

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Pitch feedback

  • 1. PITCH FEEDBACK FOR MY MUSIC MAGAZINE
  • 2. WHICH INSTITUTION WOULD BEST SUIT MY MAGAZINE? Person 1 Somebody with a big publishing background and has a lot of money would suit your magazine because of their knowledge in the industry and their contacts to big bands. As you are also targeting young adults big glossy modern product target young people. Person 2 The bigger publication would suit your magazine because they can feature big names in your magazine and still stick to your genre however it might no suit your target audience because their age. Person 3 The smaller publication would help you focus on your genre however if there is not much money going into it the target audience won't be as interested because it won't be
  • 3. WHAT NAMES DO YOU FIND MOST SUITABLE FOR THE MAGAZINE? Person 1 I like bass it gives an urban feel which reflects your genre. Person 2 I think louder sounds to much like a pop magazine or for a younger target audience I would choose bass. Person 3 Bass I'd the suitable choice as it is relevant to your genre of main having bass guitars and instruments and it is short and snappy like other magazines you see.
  • 4. DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF HAVING UPBEAT ARTICLES OR WOULD YOU LIKE IT TO BE MORE FORMAL? Person 1 I like the idea that it will be upbeat the articles however I think that it should have a more formal tone to it as this would change the magazine so it different to others. Person 2 The target audience would suit a lively formal tone so somewhere in the middle this makes the audience engage as it would suit their older age. Person 3 I like the more upbeat article as it would suit your genre however the target audience wouldn't suit as it is too young of an audience.
  • 5. DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF BRIGHT VIBRANT COLOURS Person 1 I like the idea however I don't think it would suit your genre I do think it would suit your target audience Person 2 The bright colours would suit the audience however to bold for the genre Person 3 The colours makes the magazine look modern which would appeal to the target audience. Yes I like the idea.
  • 6. DO YOU THINK THERE IS COMPETITION WITH THIS MAGAZINE PROPOSAL? OR WILL THIS MAGAZINE BRING SOMETHING NEW? Person 1 The competition would be bigger magazine that have a big name for the selfs this would be hard to stand out from however I think if you make the genre more formal there is a gap in the market. Person 2 There is a chance to bring something new as their isn't many big magazine that suit that typical genre. The formal tone would suit your target audience. Person 3 There is a danger with billboard magazine as it is very similar however you are targeting it at people with less money but keeping the classy parts of it this would make it stand out.