Media A2 Evaluation Question 3

1. What have you learned from
your audience feedback?

2. GoTo Rough Cut Feedback
Rough Cut Feedback
The feedback we got for our rough cut was that the
genre was clear and the green tint throughout the
film trailer was an obvious representation of
jealousy.The trailer was enjoyed overall and was
seen to sell the brand as a whole.
The suggested improvement was to make the trailer
longer from 0:45 seconds to 1 minute.

3. Survey Monkey Feedback
The feedback from the survey was mostly positive
about our brand. It was expressed that the soundtrack
was good and effective. Also the poster, magazine
and trailer all promote the brand and make people
want to go see the final product.The survey also
confirmed that the green tint was understood and
approved of. However it was not 100% clear that the
poster and trailer were interlinked and of the same
brand.
https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/CH5LGMG

4. Storyboard
GoTo Storyboard
Feedback
GoTo Storyboard
Overall our storyboard received positive feedback from our peers and teacher. Our teacher
gave us some small changes that could be made to improve the trailer as a whole:
In the storyboard we had
a shot of the male
character walking behind
the female character. We
decided to change this
shot to him looking down
on her as she walks
through a tunnel.This was
due to the fact that it was
a more unique shot and it
was easier to shoot.
The only change we
made to this shot was
the means of viewing
the video. Instead of a
computer we changed
it to a smart phone.
This is because it
seemed more realistic
in the modern world.
We changed the look of the last shot by having the female
character side on and the hand coming over her mouth
instead of her eyes. We did this because our teacher said it
looked better and was more effective.
In the feedback we got a very positive response for this
shot so we increased the screen time.We also used point-
of-view shots to make the shot more interesting.

5. Soundtrack Changes
We were given the suggestion that the music needed to have a
smoother transition at the beginning and a climax at the end.
In response to this feedback we put a small sound effect over
the transition part of the soundtrack.This masked the
transition and also added to the ‘creepy’ feel of the trailers
genre.We also added a generic climaxing string sound at the
end to make the trailer more captivating for the viewer and
keep them on the edge of their seat.These two changes made
the trailer more enjoyable to the viewers and make them want
to see the full movie.