overall feedback sheet

1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: RICHARDS Anthony
Planning – comments and mark out of 15/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 30/40
Footage:
Good use of camera, with good variety of shots, mostly in focus. Good use of framing.
Some good use of mise-en-scene (especially the use of locations/performance). Use of
stock footage works well.
Editing:
Video is edited to beat with good actions to beat. Good use of transitions that link with
song and visuals. Footage has been edited well; found footage has been edited to
black and white effectively.
Overall:
Good video that meets the conventions of the genre. Good attention to visuals to
maintain audience interest. Narrative is clear, with a good performance from actor.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 9/10
Evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Front cover is good with clear understanding of layout. Back cover shows awareness of
design conventions. Inside covers show effective creativity. Clear theme shown
throughout design, very good manipulation of images.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 10/10
Evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
Clear design and great image with excellent manipulation shown. Good variety of font
with excellent awareness of layout and design. Simple, elegant design. Good addition
of new album and previous albums on advert.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20
Question 1:
Prezi –good detail on how video conforms/challenges chosen genre. Good detail on
how mise-en-scene used in video especially the use of costume, colour and location.
Good reference to real products with images taken from real products to show how
product conforms to genre conventions. Some detail on technical conventions used –
black and white.
Question 2:
Video – very good detail on how the 3 products work together with the same theme
running through each product. Clear design throughout with key elements – colour,
iconography, image and font – used in all products creating meaning and familiarity
with audience. Good detail on use of ‘star’. Links to real products in show good
understanding of task.

2. Question 3:
PowerPoint/SlideShare– good post with a range of feedback from TA. Some reflective
comments with strengths and weaknesses identified and ways to improve work in
future.
Question 4:
Prezi – good succinct detail on technologies used and how effective they were in parts
of production. Could have had more of a critical response.
Overall:
Posts show good understanding of task with good research and information. Work
lacks good use of terminology or links to technical elements.
Good use of technology in evaluation.
Practical work is of a high standard and student has made good progress.
Total 79/100 Grade: B