2. Focus groups
I used focus groups throughout my
production stages getting information on
personal preferences from peers, I used
them a number of times when creating
my production asking for opinions and
most of the time I would adjust my
production accordingly
3. Individual comments
The footer on front cover my colour scheme was a bit difficult to read because of the colouyr clash
with the text on the image. It should be more contrasting colour so the text is then easier to read.
After receiving this feedback I then made the necessary adjustment to the colour of the text to make it
stand out changing it to a yellow an white combination that then became part of my house style
4. Individual comments
Michael Friend
The layout on the contents page looked a little bare with only two columns of writing and would
look better with 3 columns so there is enough information on the page to engage me also the
page looks quite dull and there possibly isn’t enough colour on the page in my opinion.
After taking this information on board I then added the extra column as was really pleased with
the outcome and I put colour on the headings of each section on the contents and I though it
was really effective at gaining the audiences attention and made it easier to navigate
5. Individual comments
Carol Beaumont
I think that the image on the advertisement was over exposed, it was too bright so therefore
made the image look strange, it would look a lot better darkened I also think that a darkened
image would help the text stand out more.
After taking this on board I darkened the image and I also played with the colour balance and it
allowed me to make the image colours similar to the house style on the page which was a purple
6. Individual comments
Morgan Reeves
I think that the images on the contents page really entice me to read through the magazine I also
think that the articles match up well to the images, the articles however could have had
descriptions underneath to give me more information though.
I took this point on board and tried to put descriptions underneath, but I found that the article
name gave most of the information and I found it difficult to explain without repeating what was
said in the articles name. I then disregarded this point.