2. Strengths
• Our camera work was good and we had a lot
of angles.
• The editing and the effects on the clips made
built up the suspense.
• We had thought about our Mise On Scene and
it worked making it look more effective.
• There was nice foreshadowing skills used.
• There was a good use of transformations.
3. Improvements
• There could be better sound to improve the
suspense.
• Some of the clips could be shortened.
• The scene of the cleaner running away causes
confusion and so if possible it should be
removed.
• Some of the lighting in the scenes could be
better.
4. How we will improve our video
• We will improve the sound and this will be our
main priority as this creates the mood of the
film.
• We will shorten some of our clips and remove
the clips of the cleaner running away.
• If it is possible we will improve the lighting by
playing around with the effects on the clips.
This is the scene that we
will remove.
