2. Peer 1
• Is the genre of the magazine clear? If so How is it? The genre is clear you can tell it is a pop
magazine. This is because of the use of the colour scheme and the images.
• How would you critique the photography throughout the production with regard to shot
composition, distance, lighting. The only thing that I would change to do with the images would
be use a white background and not a black one to that the images fit in well with you magazine.
• What do you think about the layout? How could I improve it? The text could be more clear to
read.
• Do you think there is a consistent house style across all 4 of the pages? There is a consistent
house style throughout the magazine.
• What do you think the similarities are with professional products? The similarities with the
professional products are they both have a mast head and the main bits of information is written
in bold.
• What could I do to improve the pages? To improve the pages you could add a some more details
to them.
3. Peer 2
• Is the genre of the magazine clear? If so How is it? The genre is clear because of the text
which is used.
• How would you critique the photography throughout the production with regard to shot
composition, distance, lighting. The photography is good and they wouldn’t change it.
• What do you think about the layout? How could I improve it? The layout is good it has a
good amount of pictures and text. It could be improved by thinking about the layout of
the magazine.
• Do you think there is a consistent house style across all 4 of the pages? Yes because
there is a colour scheme through and the sell lines are different fonts used
• What do you think the similarities are with professional products? The similarities with
the professional products are they both use a colour scheme and they both have main
images
• What could I do to improve the pages? To improve the pages you could to much text on
the double page spead
4. Peer 3
• Is the genre of the magazine clear? If so How is it? The genre is clear you can tell
it is a pop magazine. This is because of the colours used are bright
• How would you critique the photography throughout the production with regard
to shot composition, distance, lighting. The only thing that I would change to do
with the images would be always use a white back drop and
• What do you think about the layout? How could I improve it? The layout is good
and not many improvements need to be made.
• Do you think there is a consistent house style across all 4 of the pages? Yes there
is a consistent house style because it is all set up in columns and in boxes.
• What do you think the similarities are with professional products? The similarities
with the professional products are they both they both have a title and detailed
text
• What could I do to improve the pages? To improve the pages you could change
the boldness of the main text.
