1. Abigail Menzies 7411
Nicole Lewis 7395

2. Girl is
walking into
the park.
She finds a
bench, sits
down and
takes out her
phone.
Reads text
from friend
that says, ‘I’m
Busy’.
She puts her
bag down and
takes out her
journal.
She opens her
journal and looks
over her previous
entries.
FLASHBACK.
In the bathroom,
looking at her
bruises.
END OF FLASHBACK.
FLASHBACK.
Girl leaving and
mother telling
her make sure
she’s back home
by 4:30.
END OF
FLASHBACK.
Girl checks the
time.
Turns the
next page of
the journal.
FLASHBACK
Girl and her
mother
arguing. Then
mother slaps
her.
END OF
FLASHBACK.

3. Puts away
her journal
and rushes
out the
park.
Girl gets on the bus
and checks the time.
Running
down her
street.
Stops running at
the front door.
Has voice overs in
her head.
Hears a vibration,
takes out her phone
and see 10 missed
calls from her
mother.
Door.
Girl.
Door.
Girl.
Door.

4. Shot Description Prop/costume
Close up shot Close up on character’s feet as she walks (show
at different angles)
Close up shot Camera zooms in on character’s hand so the time
on the watch is visible
watch
Close up shot Side view of character’s face but face isn’t shown
as her hair is covering her face
Long shot Girl’s back is to the camera as she walks to the
bench
Mid shot Camera is place behind the bench and shows girl
as she sits down
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s hand as she takes
her phone out her pocket
phone
Point of view Camera zooms on phone message and show
girl’s friend declines her invite
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s facial expression
after reading the text
Wide shot Character takes out journal out of bag Bag, journal
Overhead shot Camera focuses on journal’s content as character
flicks through

5. Shot Description Prop/costume
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s face as she
reminisces
Mid shot Character is staring at herself and her bruises in
the mirror
mirror
Close up shot Camera acts as the mirror and focuses on
character’s bruises
Close up shot (back in present) Camera focuses on character’s
face
Overhead shot Character continues flicking through journal journal
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s face from a low
angle as she reminisces again
Wide shot Character and her mother is arguing
Close up shot Camera focuses back on character’s face
Overhead shot Character looks at time and realises she’s late
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s face as she
reminisces being told by her mom to come home
early
Long shot Character runs down the stairs as her mother tells
her what time to reach home

6. Shot Description Prop/costume
Wide shot Character packs up her belongings and gets up from
bench
Long shot Character walks out of the park
Long shot Character gets onto the bus
Mid shot Character sits on the bus and looks at the time
Wide shot Character runs down her road then stops by her gate
Long shot Character stops by her gate and contemplates
whether to go in or not
Mid shot Character looks around
Point of view Character looks at time again watch
Long shot Character stands still and stares at the door
Long shot Camera focuses on the door
Mid shot Character stands in the pathway but is now nearer to
the door
Long shot Camera focuses on the door again
Close up shot Camera focuses on character’s face
Long shot Camera focuses on the door again