2. Opening Sequence
Timeline Draft 3
Girl is walking
into the park.
She finds a
bench, sits down
and takes out
her phone.
Reads text from
friend that says,
‘I’m Busy’.
She puts her bag
down and takes out
her journal.
She opens her journal
and looks over her
previous entries.
FLASHBACK.
Girl’s friend see her
bruise and quickly covers
it up.
END OF FLASHBACK.
FLASHBACK.
Mother strangling
her.
END OF FLASHBACK.
Turns the next
page of the journal.
Turns the next
page of the
journal.
FLASHBACK
Girl checking her
bruises in the
mirror.
END OF
FLASHBACK.
3. Opening Sequence
Timeline Draft 3
Puts away her
journal and
rushes out the
park.
Girl gets on the
bus. Hears a
vibration, takes
out her phone
and see 9 missed
calls from her
mother.
Running down
her street.
Stops running at
the front door.
Has voice overs in her
head.
Door.
Girl.
Door.
Checks the time.
4:20
Voice over of
mother
telling her to
be home by
4:30.
Door.
Girl.
