1. The Mystery
EXT. IN LOCAL PARK/woods pathway/ – DAY
1.1 It will be a wide shot - we will have a eye line camera
shot of Alex walking down her local park
1.2 It will be a close up- eye line, we will be
showing her phone, and why she is looking at it
1.3 It is a high angle, zoomed in, and it will also be an over
the shoulder shot, and it will be a shot of the phone.
1.4 Close up, reaction shot of the protagonist, reacting to the
phone call.
1.5 A wide shot in where we see the protagonist going from the
park into the woods, and seeing the antagonist walking down the
other way.
We are going to have the girl walking through her local
park on her phone, texting one of her friend. And after
taking a walk in the park, she is passing through the woods
because she is on her way to catch the bus. And as she is
passing by the woods and is a tall figure back from the
other side.
However because the girl was on her phone she doesn’t see
the man walking towards her, ad so they bump into each
other, she says sorry, however she does look up as she is
saying it.
EXT. LOCAL CORNER SHOPS/
2.1 we are going to have an establishing shot, of the
protagonist turning into the corner, entering the corner shops.
2.2 the other shot is a medium shot, eye line of the man
walking into the corner shop as the protagonist reaching the
shops
2.3 we are going to have a medium shot of the protagonist
coming out the shops, as she Is answering her phone.
2.4 and then we are going to have an high angle shot looking
2. down onto the man as he exhales heavily and angrily as she
walks away without apologizing yet another time.
We have the girl buying things from her mum from the shop,
however we also have the male heading towards the shops.
They don’t see each other yet, the man is walking into the
shop as the girl is looking for the things she is getting.
It is only till they both go up to pay that the man
remembers her face, but doesn’t say anything.
As they are walking the shops, the girl bumps into the man,
however doesn’t really pay attention to what’s happening,
because she is on her phone again, the man is looking at
her waiting for apology, however he doesn’t get one, all
she does is raises her hand to signify that she is sorry.
EXT. ALLEYWAY – DAY
3.1 the first shot we are going to have is going to be a
tracking, eye line shot of Alex and her friend walking down the
alleyway.
3.2 then are next shot is also going to be another tracking
shot of the antagonist rushing down the alleyway as well, in
the opposite direction.
3.3 then we are going to have a close up/ reaction shot, of the
two girls the man cuts in-between them as rushing down the
alleyway.
This is the first time we see both the man and girl walking
by the alleyway, but this time the girl is with a friend,
they are heading to the park, they get midway through the
alleyway, and on the other side of the alleyway, there we
have the man heading towards them, however this time the
man don’t see the girls, this time it seems like the man is
in a rush to get somewhere, and he is always breathing very
heavy. And as he is rushing down the alleyway he cuts in
between the two girls, Alex’s friend, starts looking him up
and down, angry at what just happened, but Alex recognizes
his figure, she now realizing it’s the same man that she
keep running into in the last few days.
EXT. PARK – DAY
4.1 wide, high angle shot, of the girls sat down on the glass,
3. doing their schoolwork.
4.2 and then from the wide shot, we will go into a close up of
the protagonist’s face, and from then we are going to zoom into
an extreme close up of her face, where she starts having the
flashbacks.
4.3 a wide shot of the girls packing up their stuff, and
leaving the park.
This location we only have Alex and her friend, this is a
carry on from the last location, Alex starts have a
flashback to when she tills bumps into the man they just
saw in the alleyway, speeding down towards them. She seems
to be freaked out because she has only just found out that,
the man they just saw in the alleyway, is the same man, she
has been seeing in the last few days, here the main
character, Alex keeps having flashbacks to the other times
when she has bumps into him.
And when she starts having her flashbacks, we are going to
do a close up into her eyes, and then we are going to fade
back to the scenes in which she has bumped into the man
before, in the other locations (woods pathway, local shops
and also the alleyway.) after she has the flashbacks, the
scenes of the mans are going to fade back into her eyes,
and then from her eyes, we are going to zoom back away from
her eyes into a wide shot of the girls sat down on the
grass, doing their work.
EXT. PARK/ALLEYWAY- afternoon/dark
5.1 we will have a long shot of the girls entering the pathway,
in the same shot, the girls will walk past the camera, and then
we will see the man entering the pathway as well.
5.2 then an eye line, tracking shot of the two girls walking
faster down the alleyway, due to them hearing the antagonist
footsteps.
5.3 a close up of the antagonist’s hand tapping the
protagonist’s shoulder, as they are coming out from the
alleyway.
So after a long days of working in the park, it is getting
dark, and they starts packing up their work, and start
4. making their way back home. They are making their way into
the alleyway, and then we are going to see them entering
the alleyway, and as they are walking down the alleyway, we
see that man also entering the alleyway. Alex hears the
footsteps following her, they are getting faster and
faster, Alex grabs onto her friend, and drags her to go
faster, and then has they get to the end of the alleyway,
the man reaches out and just touches the girl’s shoulder,
and then they run off towards their house.
EXT. OUTSIDE OF HOUSE- night
6.1 we are going to have an wide shot, of the protagonist and
her friend as they are reaching their house door
6.2 medium shot of the man standing on the side of the road
The two girls are reaching the house, Alex is sacred/shocked at
what just happened, and then are they are trying to get into
the house, and we see the man standing outside on the side of
the road.
6.3 then we are going to have an over the shoulder shot, as the
man is taking off his hoodie.
6.4 a close up shot of the protagonist’s face, as she shows a
face of relives, so a reaction shot.
The man:
“Excuse me! Hey there, erm I just moved on to the street,
erm I been trying to say hello for the last few days, and I
just never had to opportunity to say anything.”
