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Writing Effective Emails
Better Practices and NBTS Guidelines for Maximum Impact
Why?
     Life is fast-
     paced.
     As number of emails and other
     “distractions” (Facebook, Twitter,
     FourSquare, text messages, etc.)
     increase…



…attention span decreases
Our Job as Email Marketers
Goal
•  To make each email as relevant and interesting
   as possible to the recipient.
Outcomes
•  Constituents pleased they are receiving
   information they requested.
•  Higher open, click-through, action rates.
•  NBTS is not regarded as a spammer.
A Note About Recipients
•  One of the most important decisions you can
   make in preparing a blast email is who the
   recipients will be.
•  Sending to people truly interested in the
   content you are providing is more important
   than any other best practice in this
   presentation.
•  Increased open, click-through, action rates.
   Decreased unsubscribe rates.
•  Keeps people interested, less email list churn.
Email “Consumption” Stages


         Open
Sender   Subject    Preview Above         Entire
Name      Line       Pane   The Fold      Email
                   Click-Through/Action
Sender Name
•  The From Line is the first thing people read, and
   is an important factor in whether or not the email
   is opened.
•  Helps build recognition and trust.
•  As little as 20 characters will display in the From
   line.
•  Example
   –  Harriet Patterson, National Brain Tumor Society
   –  National Brain Tumor Society
Sender Name - Guidelines
•  For consistency, emails should be from “National
   Brain Tumor Society” or the event name.
•  Individual names and titles can be included in the
   closing salutation.
•  From email addresses should also stay
   consistent. Suddenly changing the from address
   can land you in spam.
•  For the first in a series of emails, ask the
   recipient to add the address to their address book
   to ensure delivery to the inbox.
Subject Line
•  Be specific, not misleading.
•  Provide a sense of urgency.
•  Speak to their needs and interests.
•  Put the most important information first.
•  These are general guidelines - Test! Test!
   Test! What types of subject result in the
   greatest click-through or action rate?
Subject Line - Guidelines
•  Do not repeat “From” name in subject line.
•  Do not use all caps or exclamation points.
•  Because of differing character limits in email
   clients, 40-50 characters is recommended,
   and 60 characters is the limit.
•  First word capitalization only.
Preview Pane
•  More than 70% of email users report utilizing the
   preview pane.
•  The preview pane will show the top 2 – 4 inches
   of the message, often with images blocked.
•  Put the most important content, the value
   proposition, or the action item in the first few lines
   of the email.
•  The first few lines should draw the person in and
   encourage them to continue skimming in the
   preview pane or to open the message.
Above the Fold
•  Similar to preview pane concepts.
•  Email readers tend to focus on content
   closest to the top, or sometimes the entire
   first screen of text.
•  Again, make sure the most important content
   and links are near the top of the email.
Writing for Email
•  Speak conversational, not corporate.
•  Short sentences.
•  Get to the point.
•  No flowery language needed.
•  Paragraphs should be no longer than five
   lines.
Email Skimming
•  Only 19% of emails are actually read, the rest
   are skimmed.
•  Put the most important content in
   components of the emails that can be easily
   skimmed.
•  Headlines get the most attention followed by
   bulleted or numbered lists.
Calls to Action
•  One call to action
•  Bring the horse to water – Tell them what
   they should do, why they should do it, and
   how to take the next step.
•  Use colorful buttons and multiple links.
•  Make the email shareable – Tell-A-Friend
   tool, IS/Comm to look into other tools.
Other Better Practices
•  Length – most content above the fold, do not
   make readers scroll down more than once.
   –  Anything that needs lots of description or text should
      live on your website, not in the email.
•  Timing – studies have shown that Tuesday at 11
   AM best sending time, followed by Wednesday at
   11 AM.
•  First in email series - Ask users to add your email
   address to their address book (to avoid spam
   folder).
NBTS Guidelines
•  Links
   –  Do not say “click here”
   –  Set links to open in new window
   –  Include link title
   –  Make sure they work when testing email
•  Text version
   –  End of line/delete
   –  Remove http:// except for Tell-A-Friend, Unsubscribe or
      view on web links
NBTS Guidelines
•  Use Dear First Name/Friend for non-
   newsletter emails.
•  If an email is going to only ONE time zone,
   the ideal time to send is between 11 AM and
   1 PM in that time zone.
•  If an email is going to multiple time zones, it
   should be sent between 12 PM and 3 PM ET.
NBTS Style Guide
•  Dates: June 25 not June 25th
•  Times: 5 PM, 5 – 7 PM, or 8:00 AM – 9:00 PM
•  Serial commas: apples, oranges, and bananas
•  Use “the” before NBTS only in the middle of a
   sentence.
•  Acronyms
•  One space only between sentences
•  “website” not “Web site”
Email Proofing and Coding
•  Emails should be submitted to Comm (Anne
   and Lisa) three days or more prior to send
   date – again not on a Friday.
•  Email will then be coded by IS
  –  Why does an email need to be coded?
Questions?

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Writing Effective Emails

  • 1. Writing Effective Emails Better Practices and NBTS Guidelines for Maximum Impact
  • 2. Why? Life is fast- paced. As number of emails and other “distractions” (Facebook, Twitter, FourSquare, text messages, etc.) increase… …attention span decreases
  • 3. Our Job as Email Marketers Goal •  To make each email as relevant and interesting as possible to the recipient. Outcomes •  Constituents pleased they are receiving information they requested. •  Higher open, click-through, action rates. •  NBTS is not regarded as a spammer.
  • 4. A Note About Recipients •  One of the most important decisions you can make in preparing a blast email is who the recipients will be. •  Sending to people truly interested in the content you are providing is more important than any other best practice in this presentation. •  Increased open, click-through, action rates. Decreased unsubscribe rates. •  Keeps people interested, less email list churn.
  • 5. Email “Consumption” Stages Open Sender Subject Preview Above Entire Name Line Pane The Fold Email Click-Through/Action
  • 6. Sender Name •  The From Line is the first thing people read, and is an important factor in whether or not the email is opened. •  Helps build recognition and trust. •  As little as 20 characters will display in the From line. •  Example –  Harriet Patterson, National Brain Tumor Society –  National Brain Tumor Society
  • 7. Sender Name - Guidelines •  For consistency, emails should be from “National Brain Tumor Society” or the event name. •  Individual names and titles can be included in the closing salutation. •  From email addresses should also stay consistent. Suddenly changing the from address can land you in spam. •  For the first in a series of emails, ask the recipient to add the address to their address book to ensure delivery to the inbox.
  • 8. Subject Line •  Be specific, not misleading. •  Provide a sense of urgency. •  Speak to their needs and interests. •  Put the most important information first. •  These are general guidelines - Test! Test! Test! What types of subject result in the greatest click-through or action rate?
  • 9. Subject Line - Guidelines •  Do not repeat “From” name in subject line. •  Do not use all caps or exclamation points. •  Because of differing character limits in email clients, 40-50 characters is recommended, and 60 characters is the limit. •  First word capitalization only.
  • 10. Preview Pane •  More than 70% of email users report utilizing the preview pane. •  The preview pane will show the top 2 – 4 inches of the message, often with images blocked. •  Put the most important content, the value proposition, or the action item in the first few lines of the email. •  The first few lines should draw the person in and encourage them to continue skimming in the preview pane or to open the message.
  • 11. Above the Fold •  Similar to preview pane concepts. •  Email readers tend to focus on content closest to the top, or sometimes the entire first screen of text. •  Again, make sure the most important content and links are near the top of the email.
  • 12. Writing for Email •  Speak conversational, not corporate. •  Short sentences. •  Get to the point. •  No flowery language needed. •  Paragraphs should be no longer than five lines.
  • 13. Email Skimming •  Only 19% of emails are actually read, the rest are skimmed. •  Put the most important content in components of the emails that can be easily skimmed. •  Headlines get the most attention followed by bulleted or numbered lists.
  • 14. Calls to Action •  One call to action •  Bring the horse to water – Tell them what they should do, why they should do it, and how to take the next step. •  Use colorful buttons and multiple links. •  Make the email shareable – Tell-A-Friend tool, IS/Comm to look into other tools.
  • 15. Other Better Practices •  Length – most content above the fold, do not make readers scroll down more than once. –  Anything that needs lots of description or text should live on your website, not in the email. •  Timing – studies have shown that Tuesday at 11 AM best sending time, followed by Wednesday at 11 AM. •  First in email series - Ask users to add your email address to their address book (to avoid spam folder).
  • 16. NBTS Guidelines •  Links –  Do not say “click here” –  Set links to open in new window –  Include link title –  Make sure they work when testing email •  Text version –  End of line/delete –  Remove http:// except for Tell-A-Friend, Unsubscribe or view on web links
  • 17. NBTS Guidelines •  Use Dear First Name/Friend for non- newsletter emails. •  If an email is going to only ONE time zone, the ideal time to send is between 11 AM and 1 PM in that time zone. •  If an email is going to multiple time zones, it should be sent between 12 PM and 3 PM ET.
  • 18. NBTS Style Guide •  Dates: June 25 not June 25th •  Times: 5 PM, 5 – 7 PM, or 8:00 AM – 9:00 PM •  Serial commas: apples, oranges, and bananas •  Use “the” before NBTS only in the middle of a sentence. •  Acronyms •  One space only between sentences •  “website” not “Web site”
  • 19. Email Proofing and Coding •  Emails should be submitted to Comm (Anne and Lisa) three days or more prior to send date – again not on a Friday. •  Email will then be coded by IS –  Why does an email need to be coded?