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UNIT 30 – LO5
Harry Fennemore
Witness Statement
Witness Statement 2
Clients likes and dislikes
• As you can see from the Witness Statement the areas in green are what
the client liked about my pitch and the areas in yellow are what the client
wanted me to improve. Belowis a screenshot from the witness statement
on WWW and what I could do better. I have made these corrections.
Survey Monkey
I used survey monkey as it gave me a
platform in which I could see all my analysis
of my pitch due to my class answering the
questions I provided on the survey. After all
of them responded to my survey then I just
simply go onto the website, log in, then I
simply click on analyze results and it shows
me everything they have all said in order to
make my pitch better the next time I do it.
From here I then changed parts of my pitch
so that the next time I do a pitch and put
out a survey monkey then their wont be as
much negative responses.
Survey Monkey
After I delivered my pitch I sent everyone in my class a
link to my survey monkey in which they all filled out. I
asked questions on the survey which will give good
feedback on how I could've improved my pitch.
Survey Monkey
Question 1
For this question, my overall score was 4, this shows that my
front cover was good enough to look professional and
aphetically pleasing but just missed out on little things that
would've made the front cover look like an actual normal front
cover that you would see on the shelves of a shop.
Survey Monkey
Question
2
In this question I asked about
how I could've improved my
pitch. The most common answer
was to plan so that I could
deliver the slides abit better
than I did.
Survey Monkey
Question 3
From these responses I can
see that my main
improvement would be to
change the colours of my
magazine as it wasn’t liked
by many people.
Survey Monkey
Question 4
From these answers I can see that all of the people that
witnessed my pitch think that the proposals that I done
for my magazine were full of information
Survey Monkey
Question
5
In this question I asked if I covered everything that was
featured in the mark scheme. From my results I can see
that most people think I did but some people think that
I haven't.
Survey Monkey
Question 6
The answers shown here
come from the question
‘what should I change about
my front cover?’. As you can
see the most common
answer was to change the
colour. However, I like the
colour of the magazine so I
wont change it.
Production Plan
Week
Beginning
05/12/16 -
Monday
Tuesday –
06/12/16
Wednesday
- 07/12/16
Thursday –
08/12/16
Friday -
09/12/16
Saturday -
10/12/16
Sunday –
11/12/16
Move into
offices with
all
equipment
brought and
ready
Present
ideas for first
issue of
magazine to
all staff
Set up
interview
with main
cover artist
and other
cover lines
included in
magazine
Gather
information
and pictures
to include in
magazine
Find
business
that would
like to
promote
magazine
Day Off Day Off
Week
Beginning
12/12/16 -
Monday
Tuesday –
13/12/16
Wednesday
- 14/12/16
Thursday –
15/12/16
Friday -
16/12/16
Saturday -
17/12/16
Sunday –
18/12/16
Take photo
shoot and
interview
headline
artist inside
magazine
Insert main
article into
magazine
Insert longer
articles into
magazine
Promote
magazine
using
businesses
who would
like to
promote
magazine
Insert longer
articles into
magazine
Day Off Day Off
Production Plan (Continued)
Week
Beginning
26/12/16 -
Monday
Tuesday –
27/12/16
Wednesday
- 28/12/16
Thursday –
29/12/16
Friday -
30/12/16
Saturday -
31/12/16
Sunday –
01/01/16
Find places
to distribute
the
magazine
once they
have arrived
Distribute
magazines
to stores and
online
websites
where
magazine
will be sold
Set up social
media
account and
promote
them to
people
Set up social
media
account and
promote
them to
people
Promote
magazine on
all social
media pages
Day Off Day Off
Week Beginning –
02/01/17
Magazine Launch
Week
Beginning
19/12/16 -
Monday
Tuesday –
20/12/1
Wednesday
- 21/12/16
Thursday –
22/12/16
Friday -
23/12/16
Saturday -
24/12/16
Sunday –
25/12/16
Find Short
stories for
magazine
Find short
stories for
magazine
Put together
magazine
Put together
magazine
Send
finished
magazine for
production
Day Off Day Off
Calendar Events
There is no events that are due that will get in
the way of my magazine release day, this is
because festivals and other music related
shows usually take place in the summer
because of the weather whereas I'm releasing
the magazine in January where it will be
extremely cold weather, however, if I festival
becomes in place at winter then I will just
cover it in my magazine and therefore it will
create more content for the reader, it may
also create more sales because people may
want to find out more about the festival.

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Unit 30 lo5

  • 1. UNIT 30 – LO5 Harry Fennemore
  • 4. Clients likes and dislikes • As you can see from the Witness Statement the areas in green are what the client liked about my pitch and the areas in yellow are what the client wanted me to improve. Belowis a screenshot from the witness statement on WWW and what I could do better. I have made these corrections.
  • 5. Survey Monkey I used survey monkey as it gave me a platform in which I could see all my analysis of my pitch due to my class answering the questions I provided on the survey. After all of them responded to my survey then I just simply go onto the website, log in, then I simply click on analyze results and it shows me everything they have all said in order to make my pitch better the next time I do it. From here I then changed parts of my pitch so that the next time I do a pitch and put out a survey monkey then their wont be as much negative responses.
  • 6. Survey Monkey After I delivered my pitch I sent everyone in my class a link to my survey monkey in which they all filled out. I asked questions on the survey which will give good feedback on how I could've improved my pitch.
  • 7. Survey Monkey Question 1 For this question, my overall score was 4, this shows that my front cover was good enough to look professional and aphetically pleasing but just missed out on little things that would've made the front cover look like an actual normal front cover that you would see on the shelves of a shop.
  • 8. Survey Monkey Question 2 In this question I asked about how I could've improved my pitch. The most common answer was to plan so that I could deliver the slides abit better than I did.
  • 9. Survey Monkey Question 3 From these responses I can see that my main improvement would be to change the colours of my magazine as it wasn’t liked by many people.
  • 10. Survey Monkey Question 4 From these answers I can see that all of the people that witnessed my pitch think that the proposals that I done for my magazine were full of information
  • 11. Survey Monkey Question 5 In this question I asked if I covered everything that was featured in the mark scheme. From my results I can see that most people think I did but some people think that I haven't.
  • 12. Survey Monkey Question 6 The answers shown here come from the question ‘what should I change about my front cover?’. As you can see the most common answer was to change the colour. However, I like the colour of the magazine so I wont change it.
  • 13. Production Plan Week Beginning 05/12/16 - Monday Tuesday – 06/12/16 Wednesday - 07/12/16 Thursday – 08/12/16 Friday - 09/12/16 Saturday - 10/12/16 Sunday – 11/12/16 Move into offices with all equipment brought and ready Present ideas for first issue of magazine to all staff Set up interview with main cover artist and other cover lines included in magazine Gather information and pictures to include in magazine Find business that would like to promote magazine Day Off Day Off Week Beginning 12/12/16 - Monday Tuesday – 13/12/16 Wednesday - 14/12/16 Thursday – 15/12/16 Friday - 16/12/16 Saturday - 17/12/16 Sunday – 18/12/16 Take photo shoot and interview headline artist inside magazine Insert main article into magazine Insert longer articles into magazine Promote magazine using businesses who would like to promote magazine Insert longer articles into magazine Day Off Day Off
  • 14. Production Plan (Continued) Week Beginning 26/12/16 - Monday Tuesday – 27/12/16 Wednesday - 28/12/16 Thursday – 29/12/16 Friday - 30/12/16 Saturday - 31/12/16 Sunday – 01/01/16 Find places to distribute the magazine once they have arrived Distribute magazines to stores and online websites where magazine will be sold Set up social media account and promote them to people Set up social media account and promote them to people Promote magazine on all social media pages Day Off Day Off Week Beginning – 02/01/17 Magazine Launch Week Beginning 19/12/16 - Monday Tuesday – 20/12/1 Wednesday - 21/12/16 Thursday – 22/12/16 Friday - 23/12/16 Saturday - 24/12/16 Sunday – 25/12/16 Find Short stories for magazine Find short stories for magazine Put together magazine Put together magazine Send finished magazine for production Day Off Day Off
  • 15. Calendar Events There is no events that are due that will get in the way of my magazine release day, this is because festivals and other music related shows usually take place in the summer because of the weather whereas I'm releasing the magazine in January where it will be extremely cold weather, however, if I festival becomes in place at winter then I will just cover it in my magazine and therefore it will create more content for the reader, it may also create more sales because people may want to find out more about the festival.