Thesis Statements
Objective
• Define thesis statement.
• Discuss the three parts of a pointed thesis.
• Discuss the creation of a working thesis.
• Build a toolbox of thesis formulas.
• Learn to evaluate the effectiveness of a
  thesis statement.
• List additional resources.
What is a thesis statement?
              • One sentence which
                outlines the arguments
                and ideas to be presented
                in your paper.
              • Think of your thesis as a
                guide.
              • Your audience expects
                the remainder of your
                paper to support the claim
                you make with the
                reasons you list.
              • Place your thesis at the
                end of your introduction.
The Three Parts of a Pointed
            Thesis
• Claim
• Link
• Reasons
Claim
• Select a subject on which there are a
  variety of possible views.
• Express ONE main idea.
• Determine your conclusions about the
  subject.
Link
• You need to connect
  your claim to your
  supporting reasons.
  This creates the
  structure of your
  essay.
• Use the word
  BECAUSE to link
  your claim to your
  reasons.
Reasons
• The claim needs to be supported by at least three
  reasons.
• Each reason will become the topic of its own
  supporting paragraph(s).

http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/essaymap/
Be sure to observe parallel
        structure.
Two Choices
• Because the thesis      However, it is always wise
  encompasses the           to create a working thesis.
  entire essay, some      • A working thesis names
                            the topic you will discuss,
  authors choose to
                            helps you focus your
  create the body of an     research, and helps you
  essay before drafting     keep your thoughts
  the thesis.               organized.
How does one create a working
              thesis?
•   First, select your topic.
•   Second, brainstorm.
•   Third, make your claim.
•   Fourth, list the reasons you plan to use
    when supporting your claim.
What if my topic is assigned?
• Create a question about   • Once you have
  your topic.                 answered the question
• Answer the question.        you have created a
• Question: Should SCC        thesis statement.
  provide all full-time
  students with laptops?
                            • Now your job is to
• Answer: SCC should          support it.
  provide all full-time     • This technique is
  students with laptops       particularly useful for
  because…                    essay exams.
What if I must select my own
           topic?
              • Brainstorm, Brainstorm,
                Brainstorm
              • Do some research.
              • Read
              • Visit the SCC Library
                homepage @
                http://somerset.kctcs.edu/acade
              • Use Opposing Viewpoints
Thesis Toolbox
• You will be asked to write a variety of
  essay types.
• Each type of essay lends itself to a
  particular thesis template.
• The follow slides will briefly introduce
  possible formulas/templates paired with
  their corresponding essay types.
Definition Essay


• Something is (or is not) something else
  based on certain criteria.
Evaluation Essay
• Something is good (bad, the best, etc.)
  because…
Proposal Essay
• Someone should (or should not) do
  something because…
How do I know my thesis is a
       good thesis?
Does your thesis take a stand?
Is your part in the on going
    discussion justified?

 Does your thesis encourage your
    readers to read further?
Does the thesis express only one
           main idea?
• Is your thesis specific?
• Can you support your claim within the
  number of pages allotted?
For more information, check out
       these resources.
•   Owl, Purdue University’s Online Writing Lab
•   http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
•   The St. Martin’s Handbook
•   Blackboard
•   SCC’s Learning Commons
Review: We have now…
•Defined thesis statement.
•Discussed the three parts of a pointed
thesis.
•Discussed the creation of a working
thesis.
•Built a toolbox of thesis formulas.
•Evaluated the effectiveness of a thesis
statement.
Thank you for your time and
        attention!

          Any questions?

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  • 1.
  • 2.
    Objective • Define thesisstatement. • Discuss the three parts of a pointed thesis. • Discuss the creation of a working thesis. • Build a toolbox of thesis formulas. • Learn to evaluate the effectiveness of a thesis statement. • List additional resources.
  • 3.
    What is athesis statement? • One sentence which outlines the arguments and ideas to be presented in your paper. • Think of your thesis as a guide. • Your audience expects the remainder of your paper to support the claim you make with the reasons you list. • Place your thesis at the end of your introduction.
  • 4.
    The Three Partsof a Pointed Thesis • Claim • Link • Reasons
  • 5.
    Claim • Select asubject on which there are a variety of possible views. • Express ONE main idea. • Determine your conclusions about the subject.
  • 6.
    Link • You needto connect your claim to your supporting reasons. This creates the structure of your essay. • Use the word BECAUSE to link your claim to your reasons.
  • 7.
    Reasons • The claimneeds to be supported by at least three reasons. • Each reason will become the topic of its own supporting paragraph(s). http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/essaymap/
  • 8.
    Be sure toobserve parallel structure.
  • 9.
    Two Choices • Becausethe thesis However, it is always wise encompasses the to create a working thesis. entire essay, some • A working thesis names the topic you will discuss, authors choose to helps you focus your create the body of an research, and helps you essay before drafting keep your thoughts the thesis. organized.
  • 10.
    How does onecreate a working thesis? • First, select your topic. • Second, brainstorm. • Third, make your claim. • Fourth, list the reasons you plan to use when supporting your claim.
  • 11.
    What if mytopic is assigned? • Create a question about • Once you have your topic. answered the question • Answer the question. you have created a • Question: Should SCC thesis statement. provide all full-time students with laptops? • Now your job is to • Answer: SCC should support it. provide all full-time • This technique is students with laptops particularly useful for because… essay exams.
  • 12.
    What if Imust select my own topic? • Brainstorm, Brainstorm, Brainstorm • Do some research. • Read • Visit the SCC Library homepage @ http://somerset.kctcs.edu/acade • Use Opposing Viewpoints
  • 13.
    Thesis Toolbox • Youwill be asked to write a variety of essay types. • Each type of essay lends itself to a particular thesis template. • The follow slides will briefly introduce possible formulas/templates paired with their corresponding essay types.
  • 14.
    Definition Essay • Somethingis (or is not) something else based on certain criteria.
  • 15.
    Evaluation Essay • Somethingis good (bad, the best, etc.) because…
  • 16.
    Proposal Essay • Someoneshould (or should not) do something because…
  • 17.
    How do Iknow my thesis is a good thesis?
  • 18.
    Does your thesistake a stand?
  • 19.
    Is your partin the on going discussion justified? Does your thesis encourage your readers to read further?
  • 20.
    Does the thesisexpress only one main idea?
  • 21.
    • Is yourthesis specific? • Can you support your claim within the number of pages allotted?
  • 22.
    For more information,check out these resources. • Owl, Purdue University’s Online Writing Lab • http://owl.english.purdue.edu/ • The St. Martin’s Handbook • Blackboard • SCC’s Learning Commons
  • 23.
    Review: We havenow… •Defined thesis statement. •Discussed the three parts of a pointed thesis. •Discussed the creation of a working thesis. •Built a toolbox of thesis formulas. •Evaluated the effectiveness of a thesis statement.
  • 24.
    Thank you foryour time and attention! Any questions?