The document summarizes changes made to different elements of a magazine between rough cuts and final versions. Key changes included making text on the front cover clearer by putting it in a box, adding a larger sell line to make it look more professional, and placing the model in front of the masthead. For the contents page, fonts were made clearer and larger in the band index to fill more space. A double page article spread was made more colorful and the images were made the same width to look more professional.

1. Changes to
Rough Cuts

2. This is my first rough cut.
I have since changed my front cover
because the text isn't clear enough,
especially at the bottom of the
magazine and it doesn’t look as
professional as there is a large gap in
the magazine where an other sell
line could go.

3. This is my final front cover
page.
I have now made the writing
much clearer by putting the
bottom sell line in a box and
making it into a banner across
the bottom so that it stands out.
I have also put a large sell line to
make it look more professional
and it links with the image so
that my audience know who the
artist is. One other final thing I
did to my magazine was to pit
the model in front of the mast
head because again it makes the
magazine more professional.

4. This is a rough cut of my contents
page.
Some of the font was not clear
enough and some was to small to
read such as the band index on the
left hand side. Once more there small
things that needed to be adjusted in
order for the magazine to look more
professional to attract my audience.
For example the band index didn't fill
the whole area on the left.

5. I have know made the font
more clearer and larger in the
band index so it is more
readable. One other thing I
have done to the band index is
making it longer so that it fills
more of the page. I have also
separated the different
sections on the contents and
put lines at the top and the
bottom to make it look more
professional and simple.

6. This is a rough cut of my double page spread
The article does have personal aspect to it. However it
doesn’t look very interesting because the colours are limited
and too plain on the article and my primary research
wanted it to be bright and attractive. One other thing that
doesn’t look professional is the border around the images
its too dark and the bottom image is longer width way than
the top two images.

7. I have taken what my primary research said they wanted to see
and out it into my double page spread. I have made the article
more colorful by making the font red where questions are being
asked, I have also took the border of as it was too dark and made
the images the same width as each other to make it look more
professional.