The document contains feedback on a film project. It discusses using sepia tones and grainy footage to depict past scenes. The main character's wife cheats on him and writes a confession letter. There will be voiceover narration during flashbacks. A shot of blood on an arm will be changed to avoid looking like suicide. The narrative may run over 5 minutes so a killing may be cut. Additional context and flashbacks will be added to keep the audience engaged and prevent boredom. The main character confesses because he has found religion. His sister-in-law would not realistically listen since he admits killing her sister, so the character is removed and a priest added instead. More of the main character's backstory