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AfterI hadfinishedmakingthe movieposterIhad
askedmypeersto lookat the posterand write down
any feedbackthattheyhadfor me to improve the
poster.Below isthe feedbackthatwasgiventome.
 The layoutis good- I like where the writing
and the name of filmis
 The editingaroundthe girlsheadcouldbe a
little smoother
 I like the layoutandthe text.The title could
have beenneaterandthe mainpicture couldbe
smallertobalance outthe backgroundand
foregroundmore
 Filmfestlogo?Redaroundface
 Top quotessmaller
 More interestingfontforbottomandtop text
 Smoothout maintitle font
 Addgreentonesonmain characterto correct
skintone
 Make maincharacter a little smaller
 Good layout- like the way he’sinthe shadows(the one onthe right)
 Title couldhave beenmade neater
Afterlookingatthe feedbackIdecidedtofollow some of the feedback,forexample,Ismoothedout
the maincharacters face and thenI cleanedupthe maintitle fontbysmoothingoverthe edges.In
addition,Imade the quotessmallerandmovedthemupabit howeverIdidnotmake the main
character small as I believe thiswouldruinthe effectIwastryingto create by showingthe twoother
characters overhershoulder.
Afterthe review page wasfinishedwe got
people tolookat ourpage andgive us
feedback.The feedbackisasseenbelow:
 The layoutworkswell
 Good use of colour
 Good colourediting
 Good layout
 Nice tightlayout
 Sharpnessof image
 A lotof text
 Image isto dark
 Poorfont
 Bordertoo large//badcrop
 Maybe addanotherpicture?
 More photos
 Spacingon columnsseemstotight
 Don’ttitle the conclusionorplot
Afterreadingthroughthe feedbackwe triedtoaddmore photosbutwe decidedthatthe one image
that we had workedthe bestwithoutaddingmore pictures. The image seemedlike agoodimage as
it wasn’tas darkas theyhad beensaying.We lookedatalready existingmoviereview magazinesand
we made ours lookedlike theirsin design.Thatiswhywe chose the font tolooklike we did. The
borderwas alsobasedona magazine and we have seenothermagazine thattitledtheirconclusion
to theirreview.

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Feedback about our ancillary texts

  • 1. Feedback about our ancillary texts AfterI hadfinishedmakingthe movieposterIhad askedmypeersto lookat the posterand write down any feedbackthattheyhadfor me to improve the poster.Below isthe feedbackthatwasgiventome.  The layoutis good- I like where the writing and the name of filmis  The editingaroundthe girlsheadcouldbe a little smoother  I like the layoutandthe text.The title could have beenneaterandthe mainpicture couldbe smallertobalance outthe backgroundand foregroundmore  Filmfestlogo?Redaroundface  Top quotessmaller  More interestingfontforbottomandtop text  Smoothout maintitle font  Addgreentonesonmain characterto correct skintone  Make maincharacter a little smaller  Good layout- like the way he’sinthe shadows(the one onthe right)  Title couldhave beenmade neater Afterlookingatthe feedbackIdecidedtofollow some of the feedback,forexample,Ismoothedout the maincharacters face and thenI cleanedupthe maintitle fontbysmoothingoverthe edges.In addition,Imade the quotessmallerandmovedthemupabit howeverIdidnotmake the main character small as I believe thiswouldruinthe effectIwastryingto create by showingthe twoother characters overhershoulder. Afterthe review page wasfinishedwe got people tolookat ourpage andgive us feedback.The feedbackisasseenbelow:  The layoutworkswell  Good use of colour  Good colourediting  Good layout  Nice tightlayout  Sharpnessof image  A lotof text  Image isto dark  Poorfont  Bordertoo large//badcrop  Maybe addanotherpicture?
  • 2.  More photos  Spacingon columnsseemstotight  Don’ttitle the conclusionorplot Afterreadingthroughthe feedbackwe triedtoaddmore photosbutwe decidedthatthe one image that we had workedthe bestwithoutaddingmore pictures. The image seemedlike agoodimage as it wasn’tas darkas theyhad beensaying.We lookedatalready existingmoviereview magazinesand we made ours lookedlike theirsin design.Thatiswhywe chose the font tolooklike we did. The borderwas alsobasedona magazine and we have seenothermagazine thattitledtheirconclusion to theirreview.