2. Do you understand the narrative of the music
video?
Do you think it reflects my chosen genre?
Is the lip synching accurate?
What do you think about the quality of the
footage?
Are there any more comments?
3. 1. I think it is a little bit disjointed at the moment, I’m
guessing the girl is in some way related to him but I
don’t think it is clear enough. Perhaps shoot them
walking away together at the end?
2. I think it does, the outdoors reflects the indie genre
as it is realistic and conveys naturalism.
3. The lip synching is good towards the start; however,
at the end it is a little bit off. Also I think the lip
synching is better in your outdoor footage, rather than
your indoor footage.
4. Overall, it appears to be high quality. I really like
the outdoor footage as it’s clear and has strong
contrasting elements to it. The indoor footage is
slightly grainy and dull.
5. I think you should get rid of the indoor footage and
just use outdoor footage, as it is a much higher
quality.
4. 1.Not quite, it is a little ambiguous at the moment. I think you
need more footage of them together or him in the narrative.
2.Yes, the clothing is casual and laid-back which you often
associate with the indie genre. I also like how you’ve filmed
outside. It isn’t staged which gives you that naturalistic element
that you often see in other music videos of that genre.
3. I think the lip synching is good, it is a little off in one or two
places but overall it’s good!
4. The quality is really good, I like the use of the lanterns in side,
when it’s dark as the contrast of light and dark is strong. The
outdoor footage is really good as well.
5. Perhaps have more close ups of the artist lip synching?
Especially in the chorus of the song. I really like the slow motion
effect as well as it gives it a stronger sense of emotion.
5. 1. I think so, has he lost his daughter? I understand,
but others may have trouble doing so. I agree with
Tom that you need to have some footage of them
together.
2. Yes, in a lot of indie videos, you see the performer
playing an instrument; I like how he is playing the
guitar in yours as it reflects the genre.
3. The lip synching is really good and accurate to
begin with and then it becomes off from the last verse
and chorus. I would re film it as the start is really
good.
4. I love how you’ve used a variety of different camera
angles as it shows variety and makes your video look
more professional. The quality is high for the outdoor
footage, but it is rather grainy for your indoor stuff.
5. No, over all it’s really good. Perhaps just tidy up the
lip synching at the end.
6. 1. From listening to the song and hearing the lyrics,
you can tell that he’s lost someone, which I’m
guessing is his daughter/sister?
2. Yes it does. It’s realistic and the audience can
relate to your video which is a common convention of
indie music videos. I like how the clothing is laid back
and he is playing his guitar.
3. The lip synching is stronger in some places than
others, but you could fix that easily by re filming the
weaker areas.
4. I think you should remove the indoor footage as it
lets you down. The outdoor footage is really high
quality and clear, and I think it becomes confusing
when it flicks to the indoors.
