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1. Media Studies Coursework
Evaluation Speed Dating
Name: Andrew Goldman
One thing you like about this
piece of work
One thing you would change if
you were editing it
Describe the
video in 1
word
Perso
n 1
I really like your ideas! They
reflect the lyrics well.
The focus of clips at times, but
overall it is really good.
Fantastique!
Perso
n 2
The use of a range for shots and
filming locations was very effective
as it draws focus on the narrative
and the lyrics of the song itself
Maybe not have that grumpy kid
who’s having an asthma attack in
that one tracking shot.
GREAT
Perso
n 3
Perfectly played the juxtaposition
of the song and the film
A couple of shots could have colour
grading, like Top of the Rock
Hilarious
Perso
n 4
I really like the twist backwards
toward the end of the video, and I
love the posters in the underpass.
Some brilliant shots in there, well
done man!
Some shots a little out of focus and
shaky but nothing too major
Creative
Perso
n 5
Really like the use of colours to
shot the contrast. The shots are
amazing and help make the video
flow so nicely
Not much to be said, being picky
saying some shots need to be a little
clearer but really good otherwise
Amazing!!!
Perso
n 6
Creative structure. Different
approach. Wonderfully edited to
create feeling for the audience
Nothing of note Outstanding
Perso
n 7
Absolutely love the overlapping
disruptive shots that create a sense
of disorientation and panic when
Rory witnesses the shooting – Very
Guy Richie.
The occasional was a little out of
focus but I think it works with the
‘dreamy’ visual set.
Humorous
Perso
n 8
Love the contrast of the black and
white to the colour it really bought
out the intensity of the bright city.
The additive cross fades also
worked really well and the
narrative was interesting to watch.
A few shots were a little blurry, just
keep an eye out for that 
Super Duper !!
Perso
n 9
Visually stunning, great transitions
from black and white to colour
which worked in showing the
change in location. Unique and
different to everyone else’s which
made it one of my favorites
Smoothness of cuts a couple of times Re-watchable