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1. Media Studies Coursework
Music Video Feedback
My music video was shown to my media class who told me what they
liked, what they'd improve and one word they'd describe my work with.
This feedback has been displayed in the table below.
One thing you like about this
piece of work
One thing you would change if
you were editing it
Describe the
video in 1
word
Perso
n 1
The cuts were in time for the beats and it
fit really well.
Nothing Amazing
Perso
n 2
I like the use of the dark room contrasting
with the B & W shots. Very nice editing and
camera shots. Well done!
I would change the lip syncing just ever so
slightly but still good.
Gorgeous
Perso
n 3
Loved the cuts between the artist singing
and the storyline happening alongside it.
More shot variety, looked like there were
some repeated shots.
Powerful
Perso
n 4
Really good shots! Amazing editing, really
effective by using black and white, creates
mystery.
Not 100% sure on why he got punched but
it’s a music video so don't really have to
know!
Fab
Perso
n 5
Great shots, really loved the black and
white was very effective. Also the use of
the red lighting on the singer was amazing,
really well done.
I think that the lip syncing was slightly out but
other than that, it was really good.
Amazing
Perso
n 6
The cuts match the beat of the drums well. I would use faster cuts in the fight scene to
make it more violent and putting emotion
behind it.
Meaningful
Perso
n 7
Great narrative. Fits the emotion of the
song well.
It could have had a stronger ending, perhaps
ending on the photo of the missing girl or
injured man.
Emotional
Perso
n 8
Really effective use of lighting and colour.
Loved it!
Cuts could be a bit more detailed for added
realism but I’m nit picking.
Atmospheric
Perso
n 9
The dark room shots are perfect, and I love
the choice of black and white. Very good all
round.
I don't think I'd change anything, it worked
really well.
Wonderful
Perso
n 10
Great choice of actors, especially matt, he
really suits the look! I loved matt's acting,
his screaming with josh really juxtaposed
the music nicely I also love the contrast
between red and black and white footage
as it made it look more visually engaging.
I would maybe experiment with mashing
your clips together in random order; kind of
like ripping pages out of a book then putting
them back together as that would look
awesome.
Awesome
Perso
n 11
The red light on Rory when he is singing
gives a good effect. The storyline was good
and the use of props also. Great narrative.
Slight lip sync changes. Deep
Perso
n 12
The variety of shots makes for a very well
edited and put together narrative
I wouldn’t change anything. Masterpiece.