1. Evaluation Speed Dating
One thing you like about
this piece of work
One thing you would change
if you were editing it
Describe the
opening in 1
word
Person
1
Great use of titles and freeze
frames
Make it snappier interesting
Person
2
The constant voice-over
explaining the narratives
background – draws audience
in
Quicker pacing? Amazing
Person
3
Great voice over and editing Pacing great
Person
4
Great use of the voice over and
the different camera angles
Some of the shots are a little
shaky, maybe use a tripod on a
couple of the shots
Intriguing
Person
5
The voice over is good,
Explains what is going to give
a clear picture and
description.
Make some of the clips faster.
Speed it up a little bit.
Funny
Person
6
The music fits well with the
opening of your film
Speed it up Excellent
Person
7
I found it really funny and
enjoyed watching, if it was
made into a film I would have
watched. Good actors and
good comedy!
Maybe talk less about the first
character although it was funny!
Hilarious
Person
8
Really funny and good actors. Some footage of the characters
talking.
Cool
Person
9
Great use of effects when
presenting the characters in
the film
I would lower the amount of
edited sound and keep some of
the voices in the film.
Excellent
Person
10
The voiceover worked really
well with the clips
Some of the clips were a bit
shakey
Superb
Person
11
Interesting and funny. Editing
was clear and smooth flowing
Some clips could be a little faster Class
Person
12
Interesting, funny and
entertaining. Very good
editing
Some clips had a bit of shake to
them
wonderful
Person
13
Great scrip and concept, sound
is atmospheric and
appropriate
Some footage out of focus fun
2. Questionnaire
What emotions did you feel whilst watching my film opening?
Tension and intrigue.
Interested.
Suspense and engaging.
What genre of film do you believe it to be?
Adventure/ Comedy.
Action.
Adventure.
What did you like the most about my film opening?
I like the personal shots.
The music was in tone with the film.
I think that the script and voice over was in keeping with the rest of the film.
Who do you think my target audience would be?
Young adults.
Teenagers.
Teenagers.
Would you watch the rest of the film after watching just the opening?
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Would you watch it at the cinema?
Yes.
Yes, probably.
Yes.
3. What age range would you think the film was aimed at?
15 to 25.
16+.
16+ (depending on film content).
Did you feel the characters were relatable?
Yes.
Yes, but not to adults.
Yes, very.
Could you give one point that would improve my film?
Use a more sophisticated font.
Alternate the shots and make sure they are more in focus.
Make the music slightly quieter so that the voices from the clip are louder.
Did the costumes and set feel appropriate for the teen adventure film?
Yes.
No, should have more outside gear on.
Yes, definitely.
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