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The Elements of Fiction

Style
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Style ::
Can be loosely conceived as applying to
everything in a story—for everything in it
involves the writer’s use of language—but…for
our purposes, we’ll say…
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Style is a writer’s technical handling
of all aspects of language
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Style includes diction ::

The kinds of words a writer uses
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Style includes syntax ::

How a writer combines words into sentences
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Style includes organization ::

How a writer groups sentences and passages (into
paragraphs, for example) and makes them cohere
more or cohere less
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                    Hemingway      Kincaid       Wallace

    Words                  1,459       673          1,125

 Sentences                  183              1         9
    Avg./
                              8        673           125
  Sentence
Paragraphs                  110              1         1
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Style also includes

• Rhythm and sound—the writer’s use of
   language’s auditory appeals, i.e., its “music,” or
   poetry

• Tone—the author’s attitude toward his or her
   subject matter
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Diction, syntax, organization, rhythm and sound,
and tone constitute the author’s voice, which
Charters defines as “the total effect of the author’s
rhetorical and stylistic choices.”
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Style also embraces those aspects of language that
extend and magnify the impact and significance of
language

• Imagery—the use of words that give a concrete
   representation of a sensory experience or an
   object that is perceived by the senses

• Symbolism—the use of an image, plot event, or
   character to suggest an abstract meaning in
   addition to its literal significance
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A final note ::

Point of view and dialogue can radically alter a
writer’s style: S/he may be creating a narrative
voice that reflects the style of the speaker.
Elements of Fiction: Style

Elements of Fiction: Style

  • 1.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOFICTION The Elements of Fiction Style
  • 2.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style :: Can be loosely conceived as applying to everything in a story—for everything in it involves the writer’s use of language—but…for our purposes, we’ll say…
  • 3.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style is a writer’s technical handling of all aspects of language
  • 4.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style includes diction :: The kinds of words a writer uses
  • 5.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style includes syntax :: How a writer combines words into sentences
  • 6.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style includes organization :: How a writer groups sentences and passages (into paragraphs, for example) and makes them cohere more or cohere less
  • 7.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOFICTION Hemingway Kincaid Wallace Words 1,459 673 1,125 Sentences 183 1 9 Avg./ 8 673 125 Sentence Paragraphs 110 1 1
  • 8.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style also includes • Rhythm and sound—the writer’s use of language’s auditory appeals, i.e., its “music,” or poetry • Tone—the author’s attitude toward his or her subject matter
  • 9.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Diction, syntax, organization, rhythm and sound, and tone constitute the author’s voice, which Charters defines as “the total effect of the author’s rhetorical and stylistic choices.”
  • 10.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN Style also embraces those aspects of language that extend and magnify the impact and significance of language • Imagery—the use of words that give a concrete representation of a sensory experience or an object that is perceived by the senses • Symbolism—the use of an image, plot event, or character to suggest an abstract meaning in addition to its literal significance
  • 11.
    G-EN270 INTRO TOICTION AR340 WEB-BASEDFDESIGN A final note :: Point of view and dialogue can radically alter a writer’s style: S/he may be creating a narrative voice that reflects the style of the speaker.