The video feedback suggested improving editing, using more slow motion, varying shots between close-ups and wider angles, changing the lead actor's costume, upgrading the car, and experimenting with filler shots and camera movements. The digipak feedback noted lighting problems, a lack of variety in angles, and too chaotic of a layout. Plans for the next draft include further conventional editing, incorporating more unique angles and close-ups, experimenting more with speed ramping and slow motion, changing filler shots, and using new props like cars and smoke bombs.

1. Draft 2 Feedback
Video:
-Bettereffectandcontrolledediting
-Furtheruse of slowmotion
-Some performance wasslightlystiff
-Locationsare strong andfitgenre
-Conor’scostume needschanging
-Upgrade car
-Typesof fillershot
-Pushcameramovement again
-Varietyof close/extremeclose ups
-Speedrampingpredominant
-Pace/More shots
Digipak:
-Lightingproblems
-Use varietyof angles
-Verychaotic
-Change font
Our plans for Draft 3:
-furthereditingwithconventions
-Use more bling
-Provide some unique angles
-Provide avarietyof close andextreme close-ups
-Challengespeedrampingandslowmotion
-Experimentwithfillershots
-Newcarsand smoke bombs
-More frequentgraphicmatching