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1. Audience Feedback Draft 1
WWW:
-Costume andUSP verystrongand clear
-‘Urban’locationsworkedwellandfitthe genre
-Performance wasstrong
-Fontwassuitable
-LipSync wasstrong
EBI:
-More locations
-Planneddance variety
-Slightcostume/propchange
-Pushandcontrol editing
-Refine tostopcontinuityerrors
-More shotvariety
Afterfeedbackourplansandpointersare:
-Use editingconventions from other vids in this genre (Slo-mo/Speed ramp/Superimposed)
-Push camera movement and try new techniques
-Use various lenses (if wecan) such as fish eye
-Use a wider range of effects that are prominent in this genre
-Add a hoody or accessory to Conor’s costume to make it more appealing/Integrated
-Plan a dance for each basetrack so itis not repetitive
-Source a quieter petrol station at a less busy time
-Refine/Reflect on the video so there’s no continuity errors or jump cuts
-Using‘Filler shots’
-Adding visual aesthetics includingsmokebombs
-Adding a longgold chain to Joey’s costume
-Usingthe ‘Alternative’ costume to make it appealingand less repetitive
-Source ‘Urban’ locations and try to usemore e.g. Under Arches/Under Car park
-Take actual ancillary photos
-Use our plans and recreate them
-Source fonts that reflect our genre