The Writing Process

        Brenham Writing Room
        Created by D. Herring
Stages of the Writing Process

   There are several stages to the
    Writing Process. Each stage is
    essential.
     Prewriting
     Writing (Drafting)

     Revising

     Editing
I. Prewriting

   Choose/narrow your topic
   Determine your
        Audience
        Purpose
        Tone
        Point-of-view
        Tense

   Explore your topic
   Make a plan
Choose/Narrow Your Topic

    Your topic should pass the 3-
     question test:

    1.   Does it interest me?

    2.   Do I have something to say
         about it?

    3.   Is it specific?
Determine Your Audience

   Your Audience is composed of
    those who will read your writing.
   Ask yourself:
     Who are my readers?
     What do my readers know about
      my topic?
     What do my readers need to know
      about my topic?
     How do my readers feel about my
      topic?
Audience continued. . .
     What do my readers expect?
       Standard Written English
       Correct grammar and spelling

       Accurate information

       Logical presentation of ideas

       Followed directions of the
        assignment!!!
             What are my length requirements?
             What is my time limit?
             What does the assignment consist of?
             Is research required?
             What format should be used?
Determine Your Purpose

   Purpose is the reason you are
    writing.
   Whenever you write, you always
    have a purpose. Most writing fits
    into one of 3 categories:
       Expressive Writing
       Informative Writing
       Persuasive Writing
   More than one of these may be
    used, but one will be primary.
Determine Tone

   Tone is the mood or attitude you
    adopt as you write.

       Serious or frivolous/humorous?

       Intimate or detached?
Determine Point-of-View
   Point-of-view is the perspective
    from which you write an essay.
   There are 3 points-of-view:
     First person—”I, we”
     Second person—”you”
     Third person—”he, she, they”

   One of the most common errors
    in writing occurs when the writer
    shifts point-of-view
    unnecessarily!
Determine Tense

   Tense is the voice you use to
    designate the time of the action
    or state of being.
     Present tense
     Past tense

     Future tense
Explore Your Topic

   Pre-writing Techniques:
       Brainstorming/Listing
       Freewriting
       Clustering/Mapping
       Questioning
       Discussing
       Outlining
Make a Plan

   Before you begin drafting your
    essay, you should make a plan
    (a roadmap).
       Review, evaluate, and organize
        ideas written in your pre-writing;
        then make a plan for your essay’s
          Thesis statement
          Support

          Order

          Structure
Thesis Statement


   The thesis statement expresses
    the MAIN IDEA of your essay,
    the central point that your essay
    develops/supports.
Thesis continued. . .

   Your thesis SHOULD:
     Accurately predict your essay’s
      direction, emphasis, and scope
     Make no promises that the essay
      will not fulfill
     Be direct and straightforward
     NOT be an announcement,
      statement of opinion, or statement
      of fact.
Support
   Be sure to evaluate the
    information in your prewriting
    carefully in order to choose the
    best support for your topic.
     Primary Support—major ideas or
      examples that back up your main
      points
     Secondary Support—details which
      further explain your primary
      support
Support continued. . .


   Basics of good support
     Relates to main point
     Considers readers, i.e. provides
      enough information
     Is detailed and specific
Order

   The Order is the sequence in
    which you present your ideas.
   There are 3 types of order:
     Time (chronological) order
     Space order

     Emphatic order (order of
      importance: least-to-most, most-
      to-least)
Structure/Organization

   Consider how your essay will
    be organized; then create an
    Outline.
   Sample Outline of standard
    5-paragraph essay:
     A.   Introduction
     B.   Body Paragraph 1
     C.   Body Paragraph 2
     D.   Body Paragraph 3
     E.   Conclusion
II. Writing

   During the Writing Stage, you
    should
     Create your essay’s Title
     Compose a draft
         A Draft is the first whole version of all
          your ideas put together; it’s a “dress
          rehearsal.”
         You should plan to revise your Draft
          several times throughout the writing
          process.
Creating Your Title
   Your essay’s title should:
       Be original
       Be a reasonable length
       Reflect your topic
       Be lively and attention-getting
   Your title should NOT:
       Be generic/repeat the assignment
       Be in ALL CAPS
       Be in boldface, “quotation marks,”
        underlined, or italicized
       Be followed by a period
Titles, continued

   Capitalization Rules for Titles:
     Always capitalize the first letter of
      the first word and the last word.
     Capitalize the first letter of each
      “important” word in between the
      first and last words.
         Do not capitalize articles (a, an, the)
         Do not capitalize coordinating
          conjunctions (and, but, or, etc.)
         Do not capitalize prepositions (on, at,
          in, off, etc.)
Effective vs. Ineffective Titles

   Topic: Cheating in College
   Effective Titles:
       Cheaters Never Win!
       Cheating in Higher Education
       Why Do Students Cheat?
   Ineffective Titles:
       Don’t Do It!
       Cheating
       Students Cheat for Many Different
        Reasons.
Writing a Draft

   Basics of a good draft:
     Has a fully developed introduction
      and conclusion
     Has fully developed body
      paragraphs, each containing a
      topic sentence, at least two
      examples, and detailed support
     Follows standard structure and
      uses complete sentences
Write Your Introduction
   Your introductory paragraph
    should do the following:
     Be a minimum of 4-6 sentences
     Tell the audience what to expect
      from your discussion (thesis)
     Move from general to specific, with
      the thesis as the last sentence in
      the intro
     Get the reader’s attention
     Set the tone for the rest of the
      essay
Introduction, continued

   Strategies for developing an
    Introduction include
     Providing background information
     Telling a personal anecdote

     Beginning with a quotation

     Using an opposite

     Asking a question
Write Your Body Paragraphs
   Each body paragraph should
    develop one of the specific points
    mentioned in the thesis.
   Each BP should contain:
     Topic Sentence—main idea of BP
     Primary Support—examples

     Secondary Support—details
Body Paragraphs: Topic Sentence

   A Topic Sentence expresses the
    main idea of the body paragraph.
   Begin each body paragraph with a
    Topic Sentence that
       Narrows the focus of the paragraph
       Accurately predicts the direction of the
        paragraph
       Refers back to the Thesis statement
Body Paragraphs continued

   Body paragraphs must have
     Unity—everything refers back to
      main point
     Support—examples and details

     Coherence—all points connect to
      form a whole; one point leads to
      another
Body Paragraphs: Unity
   Unity is achieved when
    everything refers back to the
    main point
     ALL SENTENCES SHOULD
      RELATE BACK TO TOPIC
      SENTENCE & THESIS.
     Do not include any ideas that are
      irrelevant or off-topic.
Body Paragraphs: Support
   Support is achieved through
    adequate examples and details.
   Each body paragraph should include
    at least two examples to support the
    main idea of the paragraph.
   Each example should include at
    least one specific detail that further
    illustrates the point.
Body Paragraphs: Coherence

   Coherence is achieved when all
    points connect to form a whole;
    one point leads to another.
   Coherence is mainly achieved
    through the use of transitions.
       Transitions—words & phrases
        which connect your sentences so
        that your writing flows smoothly.
Write Your Conclusion
   The concluding paragraph
    should
     Contain a minimum of 4
      sentences
     Refer back to the main point, but
      not simply repeat the thesis
     Make an observation on what is
      written
     NOT introduce any new ideas
     Create a sense of closure
III. Revising

   Revising is finding & correcting
    problems with content; changing the
    ideas in your writing to make them
    clearer, stronger, and more
    convincing.
   Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—
    the Idea level.
Revision Strategies
   Look for
       Unity
            Does everything refer back to main point?
            Does each topic sentence refer to the thesis?
            Does each sentence in each BP refer back to the
             topic sentence?
       Detail and support
            Does each BP contain at least two examples?
            Is each example followed by at least one
             supporting detail?
       Coherence
            Are all points connect to form a whole?
            Are transitions used to move from one idea to the
             next?
Revision Tips

   Take a break from your draft
    before attempting to revise.
   Read your draft out loud and
    listen to your words.
   Imagine yourself as your reader.
   Look for consistent problem
    areas.
   Get feedback from peers.
   Get help from a tutor!
IV. Editing

   Editing is finding and correcting
    problems with grammar, style,
    word choice & usage, and
    punctuation.
   Editing focuses on the “Little
    Picture”—Word level.
Editing Strategies

   Keep an Error Log to help you
    identify your problem areas and
    improve your writing.
   When editing, review your paper
    for one type of error at a time;
    don’t try to read through looking
    for everything at once.
Editing Tips

   Work with a clean printed copy,
    double-spaced to allow room to
    mark corrections.
   Read your essay backwards.
   Be cautious of spell-check and
    grammar-check.
   Read your essay out loud.
   Get feedback from peers.
   Work with a tutor!
Self-Review

   You should never move to peer
    review without first completing a self-
    review (revising & editing); you want
    your peer to look for mistakes that
    you were unable to catch yourself!
   After you have reviewed your own
    work, make the necessary
    corrections and print a clean, revised
    copy before moving on to peer
    review.
Peer-Review

   It is important to make the peer
    review process useful.
   Basics of useful feedback:
       It is given in a positive way
       It is specific
       It offers suggestions
       It is given both verbally and in writing

Detailed Overview Of Writing Process

  • 1.
    The Writing Process Brenham Writing Room Created by D. Herring
  • 2.
    Stages of theWriting Process  There are several stages to the Writing Process. Each stage is essential.  Prewriting  Writing (Drafting)  Revising  Editing
  • 3.
    I. Prewriting  Choose/narrow your topic  Determine your  Audience  Purpose  Tone  Point-of-view  Tense  Explore your topic  Make a plan
  • 4.
    Choose/Narrow Your Topic  Your topic should pass the 3- question test: 1. Does it interest me? 2. Do I have something to say about it? 3. Is it specific?
  • 5.
    Determine Your Audience  Your Audience is composed of those who will read your writing.  Ask yourself:  Who are my readers?  What do my readers know about my topic?  What do my readers need to know about my topic?  How do my readers feel about my topic?
  • 6.
    Audience continued. ..  What do my readers expect?  Standard Written English  Correct grammar and spelling  Accurate information  Logical presentation of ideas  Followed directions of the assignment!!!  What are my length requirements?  What is my time limit?  What does the assignment consist of?  Is research required?  What format should be used?
  • 7.
    Determine Your Purpose  Purpose is the reason you are writing.  Whenever you write, you always have a purpose. Most writing fits into one of 3 categories:  Expressive Writing  Informative Writing  Persuasive Writing  More than one of these may be used, but one will be primary.
  • 8.
    Determine Tone  Tone is the mood or attitude you adopt as you write.  Serious or frivolous/humorous?  Intimate or detached?
  • 9.
    Determine Point-of-View  Point-of-view is the perspective from which you write an essay.  There are 3 points-of-view:  First person—”I, we”  Second person—”you”  Third person—”he, she, they”  One of the most common errors in writing occurs when the writer shifts point-of-view unnecessarily!
  • 10.
    Determine Tense  Tense is the voice you use to designate the time of the action or state of being.  Present tense  Past tense  Future tense
  • 11.
    Explore Your Topic  Pre-writing Techniques:  Brainstorming/Listing  Freewriting  Clustering/Mapping  Questioning  Discussing  Outlining
  • 12.
    Make a Plan  Before you begin drafting your essay, you should make a plan (a roadmap).  Review, evaluate, and organize ideas written in your pre-writing; then make a plan for your essay’s  Thesis statement  Support  Order  Structure
  • 13.
    Thesis Statement  The thesis statement expresses the MAIN IDEA of your essay, the central point that your essay develops/supports.
  • 14.
    Thesis continued. ..  Your thesis SHOULD:  Accurately predict your essay’s direction, emphasis, and scope  Make no promises that the essay will not fulfill  Be direct and straightforward  NOT be an announcement, statement of opinion, or statement of fact.
  • 15.
    Support  Be sure to evaluate the information in your prewriting carefully in order to choose the best support for your topic.  Primary Support—major ideas or examples that back up your main points  Secondary Support—details which further explain your primary support
  • 16.
    Support continued. ..  Basics of good support  Relates to main point  Considers readers, i.e. provides enough information  Is detailed and specific
  • 17.
    Order  The Order is the sequence in which you present your ideas.  There are 3 types of order:  Time (chronological) order  Space order  Emphatic order (order of importance: least-to-most, most- to-least)
  • 18.
    Structure/Organization  Consider how your essay will be organized; then create an Outline.  Sample Outline of standard 5-paragraph essay: A. Introduction B. Body Paragraph 1 C. Body Paragraph 2 D. Body Paragraph 3 E. Conclusion
  • 19.
    II. Writing  During the Writing Stage, you should  Create your essay’s Title  Compose a draft  A Draft is the first whole version of all your ideas put together; it’s a “dress rehearsal.”  You should plan to revise your Draft several times throughout the writing process.
  • 20.
    Creating Your Title  Your essay’s title should:  Be original  Be a reasonable length  Reflect your topic  Be lively and attention-getting  Your title should NOT:  Be generic/repeat the assignment  Be in ALL CAPS  Be in boldface, “quotation marks,” underlined, or italicized  Be followed by a period
  • 21.
    Titles, continued  Capitalization Rules for Titles:  Always capitalize the first letter of the first word and the last word.  Capitalize the first letter of each “important” word in between the first and last words.  Do not capitalize articles (a, an, the)  Do not capitalize coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, etc.)  Do not capitalize prepositions (on, at, in, off, etc.)
  • 22.
    Effective vs. IneffectiveTitles  Topic: Cheating in College  Effective Titles:  Cheaters Never Win!  Cheating in Higher Education  Why Do Students Cheat?  Ineffective Titles:  Don’t Do It!  Cheating  Students Cheat for Many Different Reasons.
  • 23.
    Writing a Draft  Basics of a good draft:  Has a fully developed introduction and conclusion  Has fully developed body paragraphs, each containing a topic sentence, at least two examples, and detailed support  Follows standard structure and uses complete sentences
  • 24.
    Write Your Introduction  Your introductory paragraph should do the following:  Be a minimum of 4-6 sentences  Tell the audience what to expect from your discussion (thesis)  Move from general to specific, with the thesis as the last sentence in the intro  Get the reader’s attention  Set the tone for the rest of the essay
  • 25.
    Introduction, continued  Strategies for developing an Introduction include  Providing background information  Telling a personal anecdote  Beginning with a quotation  Using an opposite  Asking a question
  • 26.
    Write Your BodyParagraphs  Each body paragraph should develop one of the specific points mentioned in the thesis.  Each BP should contain:  Topic Sentence—main idea of BP  Primary Support—examples  Secondary Support—details
  • 27.
    Body Paragraphs: TopicSentence  A Topic Sentence expresses the main idea of the body paragraph.  Begin each body paragraph with a Topic Sentence that  Narrows the focus of the paragraph  Accurately predicts the direction of the paragraph  Refers back to the Thesis statement
  • 28.
    Body Paragraphs continued  Body paragraphs must have  Unity—everything refers back to main point  Support—examples and details  Coherence—all points connect to form a whole; one point leads to another
  • 29.
    Body Paragraphs: Unity  Unity is achieved when everything refers back to the main point  ALL SENTENCES SHOULD RELATE BACK TO TOPIC SENTENCE & THESIS.  Do not include any ideas that are irrelevant or off-topic.
  • 30.
    Body Paragraphs: Support  Support is achieved through adequate examples and details.  Each body paragraph should include at least two examples to support the main idea of the paragraph.  Each example should include at least one specific detail that further illustrates the point.
  • 31.
    Body Paragraphs: Coherence  Coherence is achieved when all points connect to form a whole; one point leads to another.  Coherence is mainly achieved through the use of transitions.  Transitions—words & phrases which connect your sentences so that your writing flows smoothly.
  • 32.
    Write Your Conclusion  The concluding paragraph should  Contain a minimum of 4 sentences  Refer back to the main point, but not simply repeat the thesis  Make an observation on what is written  NOT introduce any new ideas  Create a sense of closure
  • 33.
    III. Revising  Revising is finding & correcting problems with content; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.  Revising looks at the “Big Picture”— the Idea level.
  • 34.
    Revision Strategies  Look for  Unity  Does everything refer back to main point?  Does each topic sentence refer to the thesis?  Does each sentence in each BP refer back to the topic sentence?  Detail and support  Does each BP contain at least two examples?  Is each example followed by at least one supporting detail?  Coherence  Are all points connect to form a whole?  Are transitions used to move from one idea to the next?
  • 35.
    Revision Tips  Take a break from your draft before attempting to revise.  Read your draft out loud and listen to your words.  Imagine yourself as your reader.  Look for consistent problem areas.  Get feedback from peers.  Get help from a tutor!
  • 36.
    IV. Editing  Editing is finding and correcting problems with grammar, style, word choice & usage, and punctuation.  Editing focuses on the “Little Picture”—Word level.
  • 37.
    Editing Strategies  Keep an Error Log to help you identify your problem areas and improve your writing.  When editing, review your paper for one type of error at a time; don’t try to read through looking for everything at once.
  • 38.
    Editing Tips  Work with a clean printed copy, double-spaced to allow room to mark corrections.  Read your essay backwards.  Be cautious of spell-check and grammar-check.  Read your essay out loud.  Get feedback from peers.  Work with a tutor!
  • 39.
    Self-Review  You should never move to peer review without first completing a self- review (revising & editing); you want your peer to look for mistakes that you were unable to catch yourself!  After you have reviewed your own work, make the necessary corrections and print a clean, revised copy before moving on to peer review.
  • 40.
    Peer-Review  It is important to make the peer review process useful.  Basics of useful feedback:  It is given in a positive way  It is specific  It offers suggestions  It is given both verbally and in writing