Cohesion: Reference words
Introduction
  Reference words are used to:

• refer back to people, objects and ideas that
  have been mentioned earlier, or
• refer forward to people, objects and ideas that
  will be mentioned later.

  These words allow the writer to avoid
  repeating words, paragraphs, and sometimes
  whole sentences.
Introduction
    Reference words include:

•    it/they/them
•    this/that
•    these/those
•    the former/the latter/respectively
•    who/which/that
•    one/ones
•    such
It/they/them
‘It’, ‘they’ and ‘them’ are used to replace subjects
 or ideas that have been mentioned previously.

Relocating the research facility to Osaka
would seem sensible. It would save the company a
considerable amount of money each year.
It/they/them
Bavaria is an attractive region in which to live.

It has mountains and lakes, and is close to the

ski resorts in Germany and Austria.
It/they/them

We have received large numbers of reports
about the economic outlook in Japan. We are
studying them carefully. They contain useful
marketing information.
This/that/these/those
‘This’ and ‘these’ are used to refer to objects or
 ideas that are near in place or time. For example,
 ‘this/these proposal(s)’ mean(s) the one(s) just
 made or about to be made.

‘That’ and ‘those’ are used to refer to objects or
 ideas that are more remote in place or time.
This/that/these/those
At our recent meeting, you suggested we
establish a joint venture in Japan.
This seems to be an attractive proposal,
and I should like to discuss it with you
further.
This/that/these/those

Thank you for sending me some samples of
your products. These are being inspected by
our engineers and we expect to make a purchase
order in the near future.
This/that/these/those
The Prime minister was accused in the press of
wishing to increase taxation. That is not the
policy of the government, however, and the
press reports are incorrect.
This/that/these/those
Queries from customers are dealt with by the
Customer Services Department. Those who
complain receive an answer within 24 hours.
The former/the latter
When you have written about two subjects or two
ideas, you may then wish to refer to them again in
the next sentence. If you write ‘it’ or ‘he’, the reader
may not understand which of the two you are
referring to.
The former/the latter
You can use:

• ‘the former’ which refers to the first mentioned of
two items
• ‘the latter’ which refers to the second mentioned of
two items
• ‘respectively’ which refers to each of the items in
the order in which they were written, the former, then
the latter
The former/the latter
Last week , we experienced production problems
at our plants in Leeds and London. At the
former, there was a two-day strike by the
workers. At the latter, there was a machine
breakdown. Output, as a percentage of normal
capacity at these factories was 60% and 75%
respectively.
The former/the latter

We will be visited on Tuesday 12 March by
Mr Laclos and Mr Ibsen. The former is
Managing Director of our operation in
France and Italy.
The former/the latter

Our new 6 series and 8 series models sell for
60,000 US dollars and 100,000 US dollars
respectively.
Who/which/that
‘Who’ refers only to people. ‘Which’ refers to things
or ideas. ‘That’ refers to people, things or ideas,
and can be used instead of who and which.
Who/which/that

Thank you for your letter of 25 October, which I
received today.
Who/which/that

A dispute has arisen between management and
the sales staff who think that they are being
asked to do too much.
Who/which/that

At the conference, Mr Naumann will talk about
the developments that are taking place in the
company.
Who/which/that
Note:

‘Which’ can be used with ‘all of’, ‘some of’ or
 ‘none of’ to qualify the amount or number of things
 being referred to.
Who/which/that
The computers, all of which have been upgraded,
will be in use from the beginning of next month.

The goods, some of which have been dispatched
already, should all have arrived by next Friday.

The prices, none of which has been changed, are
listed in the brochure.
One/ones
‘One’ (singular) or ‘ones’ (plural) can be used as a
 substitute for a noun that has previously been
 mentioned.
One/ones
There are two relevant laws. The most
important one refers to the rates of tax applicable.
One/ones
I have quite a large number of 35 millimeter
slides that you could borrow. I can let you have
any of the ones I don’t need myself.
One/ones

There are many problems to overcome,
one of which is the security issue.
One/ones
‘One of which’ can be used to refer to one item
from a number of previously mentioned items.
One/ones

There are three new production
assistants, one of whom is a French graduate.
One/ones
‘One of whom’ can be used to refer to one
person from a number of previously mentioned
people.
Such
‘Such’ refers to things or people of a similar type
to ones that have been mentioned previously.
Such
Profits form selling investments are capital
gains. Such gains are taxable at a rate of 40%.
Such
In recent months, we have experienced many
problems with hardware. Such problems are
not easy to solve and we have had to ask for
technical assistance.

Cohesion: Reference words

  • 1.
  • 2.
    Introduction Referencewords are used to: • refer back to people, objects and ideas that have been mentioned earlier, or • refer forward to people, objects and ideas that will be mentioned later. These words allow the writer to avoid repeating words, paragraphs, and sometimes whole sentences.
  • 3.
    Introduction Reference words include: • it/they/them • this/that • these/those • the former/the latter/respectively • who/which/that • one/ones • such
  • 4.
    It/they/them ‘It’, ‘they’ and‘them’ are used to replace subjects or ideas that have been mentioned previously. Relocating the research facility to Osaka would seem sensible. It would save the company a considerable amount of money each year.
  • 5.
    It/they/them Bavaria is anattractive region in which to live. It has mountains and lakes, and is close to the ski resorts in Germany and Austria.
  • 6.
    It/they/them We have receivedlarge numbers of reports about the economic outlook in Japan. We are studying them carefully. They contain useful marketing information.
  • 7.
    This/that/these/those ‘This’ and ‘these’are used to refer to objects or ideas that are near in place or time. For example, ‘this/these proposal(s)’ mean(s) the one(s) just made or about to be made. ‘That’ and ‘those’ are used to refer to objects or ideas that are more remote in place or time.
  • 8.
    This/that/these/those At our recentmeeting, you suggested we establish a joint venture in Japan. This seems to be an attractive proposal, and I should like to discuss it with you further.
  • 9.
    This/that/these/those Thank you forsending me some samples of your products. These are being inspected by our engineers and we expect to make a purchase order in the near future.
  • 10.
    This/that/these/those The Prime ministerwas accused in the press of wishing to increase taxation. That is not the policy of the government, however, and the press reports are incorrect.
  • 11.
    This/that/these/those Queries from customersare dealt with by the Customer Services Department. Those who complain receive an answer within 24 hours.
  • 12.
    The former/the latter Whenyou have written about two subjects or two ideas, you may then wish to refer to them again in the next sentence. If you write ‘it’ or ‘he’, the reader may not understand which of the two you are referring to.
  • 13.
    The former/the latter Youcan use: • ‘the former’ which refers to the first mentioned of two items • ‘the latter’ which refers to the second mentioned of two items • ‘respectively’ which refers to each of the items in the order in which they were written, the former, then the latter
  • 14.
    The former/the latter Lastweek , we experienced production problems at our plants in Leeds and London. At the former, there was a two-day strike by the workers. At the latter, there was a machine breakdown. Output, as a percentage of normal capacity at these factories was 60% and 75% respectively.
  • 15.
    The former/the latter Wewill be visited on Tuesday 12 March by Mr Laclos and Mr Ibsen. The former is Managing Director of our operation in France and Italy.
  • 16.
    The former/the latter Ournew 6 series and 8 series models sell for 60,000 US dollars and 100,000 US dollars respectively.
  • 17.
    Who/which/that ‘Who’ refers onlyto people. ‘Which’ refers to things or ideas. ‘That’ refers to people, things or ideas, and can be used instead of who and which.
  • 18.
    Who/which/that Thank you foryour letter of 25 October, which I received today.
  • 19.
    Who/which/that A dispute hasarisen between management and the sales staff who think that they are being asked to do too much.
  • 20.
    Who/which/that At the conference,Mr Naumann will talk about the developments that are taking place in the company.
  • 21.
    Who/which/that Note: ‘Which’ can beused with ‘all of’, ‘some of’ or ‘none of’ to qualify the amount or number of things being referred to.
  • 22.
    Who/which/that The computers, allof which have been upgraded, will be in use from the beginning of next month. The goods, some of which have been dispatched already, should all have arrived by next Friday. The prices, none of which has been changed, are listed in the brochure.
  • 23.
    One/ones ‘One’ (singular) or‘ones’ (plural) can be used as a substitute for a noun that has previously been mentioned.
  • 24.
    One/ones There are tworelevant laws. The most important one refers to the rates of tax applicable.
  • 25.
    One/ones I have quitea large number of 35 millimeter slides that you could borrow. I can let you have any of the ones I don’t need myself.
  • 26.
    One/ones There are manyproblems to overcome, one of which is the security issue.
  • 27.
    One/ones ‘One of which’can be used to refer to one item from a number of previously mentioned items.
  • 28.
    One/ones There are threenew production assistants, one of whom is a French graduate.
  • 29.
    One/ones ‘One of whom’can be used to refer to one person from a number of previously mentioned people.
  • 30.
    Such ‘Such’ refers tothings or people of a similar type to ones that have been mentioned previously.
  • 31.
    Such Profits form sellinginvestments are capital gains. Such gains are taxable at a rate of 40%.
  • 32.
    Such In recent months,we have experienced many problems with hardware. Such problems are not easy to solve and we have had to ask for technical assistance.