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AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: Callum Balfour
Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 37/60
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Footage:
Is appropriate for target audience, mostly fitting genre conventions of drama/thriller
well. Controlled use of camera although some shots out of focus.
Editing:
Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end.
Sound:
Good choice of non-diegetic soundtrack, however dialogue was hard to hear in
parts.
Overall:
A proficient thriller piece, however much more clarity of narrative needed.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20
Question 1: Answered using powtoon. Excellent analysis and reflection on how
his film opening conforms and challenges his genre, using some examples. Would
have benefited from more examples.
Question 2: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Candidate explains well
who the target audience is and how they are represented in his film opening.
Excellent analysis on gender, camera movement, costumes and age.
Question 3: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate explains well that
New Line Cinema (as part of Time Warner) would be best to distribute his film
using good clear examples.
Question 4 and 5: Answered using prezi. Very detailed work on question 4,
identifying the target audience using avatars and social graphs. However question
5 (how have you reached the TA?) has been answered only briefly by explanation
of which parts of the film might attract his audience. No audience feedback has
been conducted.
Question 6: Answered using powtoon. Good detail on all the technologies used
throughout the process, however the youtube slide is missing the words.
Question 7: Answered using a word video via youtube in an essay style response.
Candidate provides a very detailed reflective piece explaining what he has learnt
throughout his journey, excellent detail, well done. Some of the text is a bit small.
Overall a high proficient evaluation, most answers offer excellent attention to
detail, however question 5 could have more.
Total 65/100 Grade: C

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Callum balfour as coursework overall marksheet

  • 1. AS Coursework Overall Marks Name: Callum Balfour Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 37/60 There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. Footage: Is appropriate for target audience, mostly fitting genre conventions of drama/thriller well. Controlled use of camera although some shots out of focus. Editing: Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end. Sound: Good choice of non-diegetic soundtrack, however dialogue was hard to hear in parts. Overall: A proficient thriller piece, however much more clarity of narrative needed. Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20 Question 1: Answered using powtoon. Excellent analysis and reflection on how his film opening conforms and challenges his genre, using some examples. Would have benefited from more examples. Question 2: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Candidate explains well who the target audience is and how they are represented in his film opening. Excellent analysis on gender, camera movement, costumes and age. Question 3: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate explains well that New Line Cinema (as part of Time Warner) would be best to distribute his film using good clear examples. Question 4 and 5: Answered using prezi. Very detailed work on question 4, identifying the target audience using avatars and social graphs. However question 5 (how have you reached the TA?) has been answered only briefly by explanation of which parts of the film might attract his audience. No audience feedback has been conducted. Question 6: Answered using powtoon. Good detail on all the technologies used throughout the process, however the youtube slide is missing the words. Question 7: Answered using a word video via youtube in an essay style response. Candidate provides a very detailed reflective piece explaining what he has learnt throughout his journey, excellent detail, well done. Some of the text is a bit small. Overall a high proficient evaluation, most answers offer excellent attention to detail, however question 5 could have more. Total 65/100 Grade: C