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©opyright Heroes 
Film house 
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ 
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk 
14th October 2014 
Dear Bill, 
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your 
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual 
property. 
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent understanding of the task, with some 
ideas for your specific audience and a well planned presentation. There were some good links to the brief 
throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being considered, although some parts of 
the presentation involved just reading out the brief – more connection to your own idea would improve 
further. 
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of 
the brief. Try to get more responses from your target audience to ensure your campaign truly suits their 
needs. 
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief. 
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the 
feedback from those also watching your presentation. 
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and 
some draft work. 
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task. 
Sincerely, 
ESim 
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.

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Bill feedbck letter

  • 1. ©opyright Heroes Film house Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk 14th October 2014 Dear Bill, Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual property. From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent understanding of the task, with some ideas for your specific audience and a well planned presentation. There were some good links to the brief throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being considered, although some parts of the presentation involved just reading out the brief – more connection to your own idea would improve further. To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of the brief. Try to get more responses from your target audience to ensure your campaign truly suits their needs. Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief. I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation. I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and some draft work. Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task. Sincerely, ESim On behalf of Copyright Heroes.