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©opyright Heroes 
Film house 
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ 
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk 
14th October 2014 
Dear Shani, Ceara and Charlie, 
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your 
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual 
property. 
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding of the task, with interesting 
ideas and a well planned presentation. You clearly work well as a team. You also made some good 
comments about your survey and results, along with the issues that the results raised. Your presentation was 
good, with good eye contact and interesting slides. 
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands 
of the brief. 
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief. 
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the 
feedback from those also watching your presentation. 
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and 
some draft work. 
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task. 
Sincerely, 
ESim 
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.

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Shani, charlie and ceara feedbck letter

  • 1. ©opyright Heroes Film house Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk 14th October 2014 Dear Shani, Ceara and Charlie, Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual property. From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding of the task, with interesting ideas and a well planned presentation. You clearly work well as a team. You also made some good comments about your survey and results, along with the issues that the results raised. Your presentation was good, with good eye contact and interesting slides. To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of the brief. Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief. I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation. I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and some draft work. Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task. Sincerely, ESim On behalf of Copyright Heroes.