Connor gave a presentation on local regeneration that showed an understanding of the brief. He provided clear examples and a good case study. However, the summary noted he could use more persuasive techniques to encourage participation. While the presentation was good, more details on campaign products and where the filmed content would be shown could be provided. The letter looks forward to seeing how Connor develops his ideas further and takes on the feedback provided.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Connor,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 15th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an understanding of
the brief, making reference to ‘Regeneration’. You gave clear examples and had
a good case study to refer to. You were aware of the needs of your target
audience.
I did, however feel that you could use more persuasive techniques to encourage
us to take up your campaign and at the next stage you could be more detailed
on the products for your campaign and where your filmed product would be
shown (e.g. TV channel/programmes).
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com