The document is a letter from Copyright Heroes providing feedback on a presentation by Lucy, Vimbai and Jason about addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. The letter notes that the presentation showed good understanding of the task and interesting ideas, but was rather short and needed more detail. It advises developing more connections to the brief and justifying choices to fully meet the aims of the task. The writer looks forward to seeing how the ideas progress in future work.

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Lucy, Vimbai and Jason,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some good understanding of the task, with
interesting ideas and a fairly well planned presentation. You also made some good comments about your
survey and results, along with the issues that the results raised. Your presentation was rather short though
and thus far more detail is needed to improve in your next presentation.
To be successful, more connections and focus on the brief is needed tenure you are meeting our aims.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was fine, but does require more information justification for choices
made and links to the brief in order to be fully successful.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.