Lucas had presented ideas for a local regeneration campaign. The summary provides feedback: The presentation showed an understanding of the task and clear ideas, though it was short. More details are needed on the campaign's aims, target audience based on survey results, and specific products and where the filmed product would be shown. Overall the presentation was good and the reviewer looks forward to seeing how the ideas develop with feedback incorporated by December 9th when draft work will be presented. Lucas is advised to keep referring to the original brief.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Lucas,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 15th October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an understanding of
the task, with some clear ideas and a well planned presentation, although it was
rather short.
I did, however feel that you could give clearer aims of your campaign and at the
next stage you need to be more specific about your target audience, giving
details of survey results and what you learnt from them. You could also be more
detailed on the products for your campaign and where your filmed product
would be shown (e.g. TV channel/programmes).
Overall, I feel that the presentation was good and something we are interested
in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com