Zoe gave a presentation on local regeneration to Regeneration on October 15th. While E Sim thought Zoe demonstrated an understanding of regeneration issues and community needs, some suggestions were made to strengthen the campaign. These included using more persuasive techniques to encourage participation and providing more details on campaign products and broadcast locations. Overall, the presentation was excellent and E Sim looked forward to seeing how Zoe further develops her ideas by incorporating feedback and staying focused on the brief. An update would be provided the week of December 9th.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Zoe,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 15th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an understanding of
the issues of regeneration and of the community. You clearly linked to the brief
and were aware of the needs of your target audience. I thought that you
presented clearly.
I did, however feel that you could use more persuasive techniques to encourage
us to take up your campaign and at the next stage you could be more detailed
on the products for your campaign and where your filmed product would be
shown (e.g. TV channel/programmes).
Overall, I feel that the presentation was excellent and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com