The document contains feedback from multiple viewers on a video product. Viewers liked that the video was short and to the point but noted issues with the narration audio sounding unnatural. Specifically, the narration was noted to be poorly rendered, too bass boosted, and recorded separately from the filming. To improve, the creator would need to fix audio pitching in the narration and include more details about the film itself.

1. Feedback
By Harry T. Docwra

2. Audience Feedback - Decklyn
 What did you like about the product?
I liked how you explored the concept of how the film used it social
media account.
I appreciate that the presenter is a young male just like myself.
 How do you think the product can be
improved?
I thought the narration sounded a bit off and too bass boosted and
poorly rendered. It’s also quite noticeable that the filming and
narration recording were done at separate times.

3. Audience Feedback - Lewis
 What did you like about the product?
I like how you managed to keep everything short and to the point
in the video. Really like the angle you film at as well.
 How do you think the product can be improved?
However I do think there could have been some more useful
information about the films social media use included in the
video.
Some of the audio in the narration sounded off as well.

4. Audience Feedback - Sam
 What did you like about the product?
I like how you showed merged clips and screenshots of the movie back and
forth with your own footage.
I also like how you sit directly in front and look straight into the camera,
makes it look more like you’re talking directly to your audience.
 How do you think the product can be improved?
I think the pitch of the narration sounded very off in some parts, like the
volume was turned up way to high for the device or software you were using.
Personally I would’ve liked a bit more information about the film itself and
the story of its delays.

5. Audience Feedback - Reflection
 What I have learned;
What I have gathered from the feedback from my target audience is that I have
managed to deliver most of the important information in the videos 3 minute runtime.
I have appealed to my audience by having myself, a teenage British male, as the
official presenter of the video.
I have also learned that there seems to be a problem with the pitching of the
narration, that it’s out of place and sounds like it was recorded at a different time.
 How I can improve my product;
To improve my product I can fix the audio in the narration section to make it sound
more in tone with the audio of the video clips. I can also feature a little bit more
information about the film itself to make the audience more invested in watching the
film.