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MADA: Architecture Assignment
Sample 2 Draft 1:
PRECEDENTS
“Thought expressed with the minimum of words”
(Racine, 1967, 63)
Jean Racine argued that ‘style’ was “thought
expressed with the minimum of words” (quoted in
Collins 1967) in the eighteenth century. This quote
has great relevance to Junya Ishigami, a Japanese
architect producing work currently in the twenty-
first century. Gathering from his descriptions of his
precedent work, when entering one of his spaces
you feel that he considers what is already
existing but doesn’t create boundaries and designs
endless and open spaces. In particular his designs
Cafeteria in University and House H are precedents
for his design of the Kanagawa Institute of
Technology Workshop. Ishigami’s style is visible by
just inhabiting the spaces.
For this assignment, students were
expected to find a relevant quote,
write about the work of a particular
architect and present a number of
key images (due to copyright
restrictions, images are not shown
here
Quotations are usually
integrated within a paragraph.
However, this assignment task
asked students to position the
quote at the top of the page,
separate from the student’s
writing. This quote appears to
be taken from a secondary
source, not from Racine's
original text.It should indicate
that Racine's wordsappear in
the text by Collins.
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House H is a design for a private
residence in Tokyo, Japan. His aim was
to see how strongly he could design the
environment and furniture objects
together whilst making it as “open and
simple as possible” (Hashimoto, 2008).
He made a terrace slightly above
ground level for leisure and walls that
were made out of plywood, but it was
of the uttermost importance that the
house be undemanding, thus promoting
diversity in every-day life. (Problem: )
Notice the use of the Author-date
version of Chicago referencing.
How is it relevant? It’s important to
explain and justify claims such as
this.
The student's expression is unclear
and imprecise. Aim to be clear,
concise and precise when writing
descriptively.
This comment is quite vague. Aim
to be clear and precise, but also try
to add depth to your analysis.
When providing a quote or paraphrase,
a page number should be given.
http://guides.lib.monash.edu/citing-
referencing/chicago
In this paragraph and the following
one,there is a lot of description but
very littleanalysis.
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Cafeteria in University is a 100m by 60m roof, a ceiling
height of 2.3m, walls that are covered in small, random
windows and pockets in the ceiling with growing
vegetation. This lightweight and large area produces a
landscape that isn’t constricted and allows the exterior
environment to come into the space willingly. This space
creates a new spaciousness, which could be said to be a
“new nature” (Hashimoto, 2008).
House H and Cafeteria in University show the
development of Ishigami’s style into designs that aren’t
contained to “spaces or landscapes” (Hashimoto, 2010),
which Kanagawa Institute of Technology Workshop fully
demonstrates. Ishigami aims to create an endless design,
incorporating space and landscape. To combine both
scenery and space is a huge style component for Ishigami.
He doesn’t wish to create a space that promotes change
and the pure, essential aspects of architecture. He wants
“students to feel as if they have travelled to some faraway
place when they visit the building” (Hashimoto, 2008).
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Collins, Peter, 1967. Changing Ideals in Modern
Architecture 1750-1950. Montreal: McGill University
Press.
Hashimoto, Jun. 2010. “Redefining Collectivity.” Japan
Architect (78):86-87.
Hashimoto, Jun. 2008. “Phenomenal Resolution.” Japan
Architect (70):20
Hashimoto, Jun. 2009. “Yearbook 2008: The Japanese
Architectural Scene in Japan 2008.” Japan Architect
(72):66-67
A reference list should be
located at the end of an
assignment. The entry for Peter
Collins' book is referenced
correctly, but the journal
articles are not quite correct. To
see how a journal article should
be referenced in the Chicago
style, visit:
http://guides.lib.monash.edu/ci
ting-referencing/chicago.
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Sample 2 Final Draft:
PRECEDENTS
“Thought expressed with the minimum
of words” (Racine,quoted in Collins,
1967, 63)
Junya Ishigami’s style is expressed with
a minimalist approach to design. He
adopts the Mies van de Rohe’s ‘less is
more’ approach, similar to Jean Racine’s
quote above. When entering one of
Ishigami’s spaces you feel
that he considers what already exists
but doesn’t create boundaries and
designs endless and open spaces.
Possible precedents for KAIT Workshop
are SANNA and SouFujimoto.
The second person pronoun ‘you’ can
be problematic: does the ‘you’ refer to a
specific person, to the reader or to
people in general? In general, it is best
to avoid this pronoun in academic
writing. A better way to approach this
would be to rephrase the sentence so it
doesn’t contain the pronoun.
This is vague and indirect. The
student's analysis should be precise
and in-depth.
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Sou Fujimoto’s work has a tendency to question
the fundamental interpretation of architecture:
exploring what architecture is and how
architecture relates to nature. His design of the
Children’s Centre for Psychiatric Rehabilitation
was completed in 2006. Fujimoto has placed
24 white cubes randomly over the site to exude
the essence of hierarchy and diagrammatic
legibility. This random placement offers different
degrees of connection and separation a lot like
Ishigami’s columns, which gently break up the
space into different work areas analysis .
Ishigami is developing a modern style expressed
through a minimum of elements, which echoes
the notion of a style that is expressed with
minimum words. Ishigami’s minimalism in KAIT
draws inspiration from SANNA’s Kanazawa
Museum and Sou Fujimoto’s Children’s Centre
and is a continuation of his own explorations
such as House H and Cafeteria in University.
The connection to Ishigami’s work is
important here, but does the
discussion go deep enough?
Consider whether this
demonstrates sufficient analysis.
The meaning here is unclear.
Notice the effective use of words
and phrases such as 'echoes' and
'draws inspiration from', which
articulate lines of influence.
This paragraph clearly articulates
the influence of particular
precedents on the architect’s
style.
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  • 2. MADA: Architecture Assignment Sample 2 Draft 1: PRECEDENTS “Thought expressed with the minimum of words” (Racine, 1967, 63) Jean Racine argued that ‘style’ was “thought expressed with the minimum of words” (quoted in Collins 1967) in the eighteenth century. This quote has great relevance to Junya Ishigami, a Japanese architect producing work currently in the twenty- first century. Gathering from his descriptions of his precedent work, when entering one of his spaces you feel that he considers what is already existing but doesn’t create boundaries and designs endless and open spaces. In particular his designs Cafeteria in University and House H are precedents for his design of the Kanagawa Institute of Technology Workshop. Ishigami’s style is visible by just inhabiting the spaces. For this assignment, students were expected to find a relevant quote, write about the work of a particular architect and present a number of key images (due to copyright restrictions, images are not shown here Quotations are usually integrated within a paragraph. However, this assignment task asked students to position the quote at the top of the page, separate from the student’s writing. This quote appears to be taken from a secondary source, not from Racine's original text.It should indicate that Racine's wordsappear in the text by Collins. architectureassignmenthelp.com
  • 3. House H is a design for a private residence in Tokyo, Japan. His aim was to see how strongly he could design the environment and furniture objects together whilst making it as “open and simple as possible” (Hashimoto, 2008). He made a terrace slightly above ground level for leisure and walls that were made out of plywood, but it was of the uttermost importance that the house be undemanding, thus promoting diversity in every-day life. (Problem: ) Notice the use of the Author-date version of Chicago referencing. How is it relevant? It’s important to explain and justify claims such as this. The student's expression is unclear and imprecise. Aim to be clear, concise and precise when writing descriptively. This comment is quite vague. Aim to be clear and precise, but also try to add depth to your analysis. When providing a quote or paraphrase, a page number should be given. http://guides.lib.monash.edu/citing- referencing/chicago In this paragraph and the following one,there is a lot of description but very littleanalysis. architectureassignmenthelp.com
  • 4. Cafeteria in University is a 100m by 60m roof, a ceiling height of 2.3m, walls that are covered in small, random windows and pockets in the ceiling with growing vegetation. This lightweight and large area produces a landscape that isn’t constricted and allows the exterior environment to come into the space willingly. This space creates a new spaciousness, which could be said to be a “new nature” (Hashimoto, 2008). House H and Cafeteria in University show the development of Ishigami’s style into designs that aren’t contained to “spaces or landscapes” (Hashimoto, 2010), which Kanagawa Institute of Technology Workshop fully demonstrates. Ishigami aims to create an endless design, incorporating space and landscape. To combine both scenery and space is a huge style component for Ishigami. He doesn’t wish to create a space that promotes change and the pure, essential aspects of architecture. He wants “students to feel as if they have travelled to some faraway place when they visit the building” (Hashimoto, 2008). architectureassignmenthelp.com
  • 5. Collins, Peter, 1967. Changing Ideals in Modern Architecture 1750-1950. Montreal: McGill University Press. Hashimoto, Jun. 2010. “Redefining Collectivity.” Japan Architect (78):86-87. Hashimoto, Jun. 2008. “Phenomenal Resolution.” Japan Architect (70):20 Hashimoto, Jun. 2009. “Yearbook 2008: The Japanese Architectural Scene in Japan 2008.” Japan Architect (72):66-67 A reference list should be located at the end of an assignment. The entry for Peter Collins' book is referenced correctly, but the journal articles are not quite correct. To see how a journal article should be referenced in the Chicago style, visit: http://guides.lib.monash.edu/ci ting-referencing/chicago. architectureassignmenthelp.com
  • 6. Sample 2 Final Draft: PRECEDENTS “Thought expressed with the minimum of words” (Racine,quoted in Collins, 1967, 63) Junya Ishigami’s style is expressed with a minimalist approach to design. He adopts the Mies van de Rohe’s ‘less is more’ approach, similar to Jean Racine’s quote above. When entering one of Ishigami’s spaces you feel that he considers what already exists but doesn’t create boundaries and designs endless and open spaces. Possible precedents for KAIT Workshop are SANNA and SouFujimoto. The second person pronoun ‘you’ can be problematic: does the ‘you’ refer to a specific person, to the reader or to people in general? In general, it is best to avoid this pronoun in academic writing. A better way to approach this would be to rephrase the sentence so it doesn’t contain the pronoun. This is vague and indirect. The student's analysis should be precise and in-depth. architectureassignmenthelp.com
  • 7. Sou Fujimoto’s work has a tendency to question the fundamental interpretation of architecture: exploring what architecture is and how architecture relates to nature. His design of the Children’s Centre for Psychiatric Rehabilitation was completed in 2006. Fujimoto has placed 24 white cubes randomly over the site to exude the essence of hierarchy and diagrammatic legibility. This random placement offers different degrees of connection and separation a lot like Ishigami’s columns, which gently break up the space into different work areas analysis . Ishigami is developing a modern style expressed through a minimum of elements, which echoes the notion of a style that is expressed with minimum words. Ishigami’s minimalism in KAIT draws inspiration from SANNA’s Kanazawa Museum and Sou Fujimoto’s Children’s Centre and is a continuation of his own explorations such as House H and Cafeteria in University. The connection to Ishigami’s work is important here, but does the discussion go deep enough? Consider whether this demonstrates sufficient analysis. The meaning here is unclear. Notice the effective use of words and phrases such as 'echoes' and 'draws inspiration from', which articulate lines of influence. This paragraph clearly articulates the influence of particular precedents on the architect’s style. architectureassignmenthelp.com