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FMP EVALUATION
PRODUCTION PROCESS EVALUATION
RESEARCH
o My strengths of my research has to be finding the time-lapse videos and
posters of the special effects make up, it is so easy to find what you are
looking for when you type it in to the internet, even if you can find the
product you were intending to find you will always find something close to
what you were trying to find. The research helped me with my product
because it helped me decide what I wanted to create with in the video what
kind of looks I wanted to create, it also helped me by choosing the
soundtrack and the style of the video. Its also helped me decide to do a
shot animation clip on Photoshop just from looking and the posters its
helped me make it in to a animation.
o My weakness of my research has to be getting the feed back from my
survey, because I didn’t know how to broadcast the link for people to fill it in
it took longer then it should also the interview I didn’t know how to ask the
questions or who to ask so I just kept putting the interviews off. I found
away around this and used social media to help me get answers on my
survey and talked to people around me to help me think of things for my
interviews and I soon got answers, if I had done this straight away I could
have looked in to the answers more then I did and found out more, this
would have had a big impact on my final product.
PLANNING
o The strengths of my planning would have to be the layouts of my products I
wanted to create, this is because it was easy to find the images I needed for
the first lay out and put it all together and can see what I want to happen and
with the storyboard it was easy to draw what I wanted to show, the only this is
I’ve changed what I am showing I am no longer doing a can in the face I have
picked other little projects and making them in to a massive video. The
planning has helped so I already had a rough idea of what I wanted to achieve
but also I can change things along the way.
o The weakness of my planning will have to be the style sheet this is because I
couldn’t think of the colour schemes I wanted to work with so it took me longer
to create my style sheet also I had trouble finding fonts that would fit my
product, but I can always change the fonts and colour schemes along the way
of producing the product.
TIME MANAGEMENT
o I would say that I managed my time really well, I got through all the
PowerPoints fast so I could get on to making and had longer
producing my product. I think I finished all of my work in good time, I
left myself two days to allow me to go over everything and check it all
over to make sure I hadn't left anything out, I handed all of my work
in on time. If I had more time I would have improved my time-lapse
videos going in to more detail and making parts slower then other
parts to allow the audience to understand, I would also add speech in
instead of text, I don’t like how the text looks plonked on to the video.
TECHNICAL QUALITIES
Some similarities of my work and the work
that I have got to compare would have to
be the way they apply the make-up and
we both don’t show what products we are
using we just get on and make the special
effect look.
Some differences would have to be that I
have added in a title page to give an idea
of what I will be showing and also I’ve got
text on top of the video explaining what I
am using/doing. The video that I have got
of the inter net almost zooms in on the
model when getting there make up done
where as mine doesn’t, also the video I
found is using a male as the model where
as I am using my self. The speed of each
video is different, the one I have done I
made into a time-lapse video where as
the one on the internet just goes at normal
speed.
AESTHETIC QUALITIES
I think my work looks ok, I think that my animation is creative as I’ve never seen something like it
as I’ve used different editing apps, added in text at the end this makes it really effective even
though its one or two works it tells the audience what it is. It shows special effects make-up in a
different way but an effective way. My time-lapse video is creative because I think they way I
have put it together and put in background music and added in al the text using premier is an
easy way of showing off your skills of media make-up. If I could improve I would focus more on
the time-lapse video and make that the main priority and try different things out, different
background music, different fonts and even speech, I think speech would be easier for people
that cant really read fast of that well this will then open to a wider range of audience.
My weakness for my little animation would be getting the ‘butterflies’ and ‘ladybirds’ accurate and
make them look like the are flying not just jumping around, to improve this I tried using the arrow
keys and that made it easier and didn’t look as bad, if I had more time I would try make it more
accurate.
My strength for my little animations would have to be using the magic wand to erase the
background of the images I took my self and of the internet.
My weakness for my time-lapse video would have to be the cutting of the clips that I wanted in
my video for example the background music wasn’t long enough for my video I had created so I
had to import a second clip and try fit it so it didn’t sound like a big change.
My strength for my time-lapse video would be the importing of all the clips and images that I
needed and the creating the text slides and putting effects on to some of the text and the
images.
AUDIENCE APPEAL
I have appealed to my target audience by thinking about what they would
like o see and what they would enjoy watching and maybe producing on
them self's or another family member. The specific parts that would appeal
would be the model that I have used, a teenaged girl this is so that it tells
you who its aimed at before you even press play. I knew by using a model
this is easy to aim at my audience better, I found all this out when I did my
questionnaire. After I had created my questionnaire I knew it would be easy
to create my products because I had all the information I needed to help me
reach my target audience.
PEER FEEDBACK
Feedback 1
What did you like about the product?
It was very realistic and It was well done and put
together in the video with the tips and how to do
it. It was very effective and did make you cringe
at the realism but it was great!
What improvements could have been made to the
product?
The video went a bit fast not giving you a lot of
time to read it so it could slow down just a little to
get the full effect
Feedback 2
What did you like about the product?
I liked all the different special effects makeup as
they where really detailed and realistic.
I also liked the transitions between the different
effects.
What improvements could have been made to the
product?
Slow down the time so its not as fast and you can
see the video in more detail.
Feedback 3
What did you like about the product?
I liked each tutorial, they were all great in there own way. I
thought the general skill to do the make up was amazing, it
looked real! overall I thought the video was amazing
What improvements could have been made to the product?
I felt as if the video was going a bit to fast for my liking, it
could have been a bit slower, also the text could of stayed
on the screen for a bit longer.
PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY
What do you agree with from your peer feedback?
I agree with all of the feed back that the video could do
with been slowed down and it is hard to watch and read
because it goes so fast, from this it my put my
audience off from watching it doesn’t give them time. I
also like the fact they have said that it looks realistic, its
almost like its professional and will get picked up from
the industry meaning my work might get spotted.
What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?
They is nothing that I don’t agree with all the feed back
is something that needs to be done.
PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY
Based on my feed back I would improve on the speed of my
video, make it slower and make the text last longer so my
audience will be able to read and them that struggle to read
fast don’t have to worry about stopping and starting the
video, if they have to stop and start the video they wont get
the idea of the atmosphere that I’m trying to create with the
look. This will benefit my audience in the long run as they will
be happy to watch the videos that I am producing and will
learn from watching them and tell other people about the
videos gaining me more subscribers because of the quality
of my videos.

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7. evaluation

  • 2. RESEARCH o My strengths of my research has to be finding the time-lapse videos and posters of the special effects make up, it is so easy to find what you are looking for when you type it in to the internet, even if you can find the product you were intending to find you will always find something close to what you were trying to find. The research helped me with my product because it helped me decide what I wanted to create with in the video what kind of looks I wanted to create, it also helped me by choosing the soundtrack and the style of the video. Its also helped me decide to do a shot animation clip on Photoshop just from looking and the posters its helped me make it in to a animation. o My weakness of my research has to be getting the feed back from my survey, because I didn’t know how to broadcast the link for people to fill it in it took longer then it should also the interview I didn’t know how to ask the questions or who to ask so I just kept putting the interviews off. I found away around this and used social media to help me get answers on my survey and talked to people around me to help me think of things for my interviews and I soon got answers, if I had done this straight away I could have looked in to the answers more then I did and found out more, this would have had a big impact on my final product.
  • 3. PLANNING o The strengths of my planning would have to be the layouts of my products I wanted to create, this is because it was easy to find the images I needed for the first lay out and put it all together and can see what I want to happen and with the storyboard it was easy to draw what I wanted to show, the only this is I’ve changed what I am showing I am no longer doing a can in the face I have picked other little projects and making them in to a massive video. The planning has helped so I already had a rough idea of what I wanted to achieve but also I can change things along the way. o The weakness of my planning will have to be the style sheet this is because I couldn’t think of the colour schemes I wanted to work with so it took me longer to create my style sheet also I had trouble finding fonts that would fit my product, but I can always change the fonts and colour schemes along the way of producing the product.
  • 4. TIME MANAGEMENT o I would say that I managed my time really well, I got through all the PowerPoints fast so I could get on to making and had longer producing my product. I think I finished all of my work in good time, I left myself two days to allow me to go over everything and check it all over to make sure I hadn't left anything out, I handed all of my work in on time. If I had more time I would have improved my time-lapse videos going in to more detail and making parts slower then other parts to allow the audience to understand, I would also add speech in instead of text, I don’t like how the text looks plonked on to the video.
  • 5. TECHNICAL QUALITIES Some similarities of my work and the work that I have got to compare would have to be the way they apply the make-up and we both don’t show what products we are using we just get on and make the special effect look. Some differences would have to be that I have added in a title page to give an idea of what I will be showing and also I’ve got text on top of the video explaining what I am using/doing. The video that I have got of the inter net almost zooms in on the model when getting there make up done where as mine doesn’t, also the video I found is using a male as the model where as I am using my self. The speed of each video is different, the one I have done I made into a time-lapse video where as the one on the internet just goes at normal speed.
  • 6. AESTHETIC QUALITIES I think my work looks ok, I think that my animation is creative as I’ve never seen something like it as I’ve used different editing apps, added in text at the end this makes it really effective even though its one or two works it tells the audience what it is. It shows special effects make-up in a different way but an effective way. My time-lapse video is creative because I think they way I have put it together and put in background music and added in al the text using premier is an easy way of showing off your skills of media make-up. If I could improve I would focus more on the time-lapse video and make that the main priority and try different things out, different background music, different fonts and even speech, I think speech would be easier for people that cant really read fast of that well this will then open to a wider range of audience. My weakness for my little animation would be getting the ‘butterflies’ and ‘ladybirds’ accurate and make them look like the are flying not just jumping around, to improve this I tried using the arrow keys and that made it easier and didn’t look as bad, if I had more time I would try make it more accurate. My strength for my little animations would have to be using the magic wand to erase the background of the images I took my self and of the internet. My weakness for my time-lapse video would have to be the cutting of the clips that I wanted in my video for example the background music wasn’t long enough for my video I had created so I had to import a second clip and try fit it so it didn’t sound like a big change. My strength for my time-lapse video would be the importing of all the clips and images that I needed and the creating the text slides and putting effects on to some of the text and the images.
  • 7. AUDIENCE APPEAL I have appealed to my target audience by thinking about what they would like o see and what they would enjoy watching and maybe producing on them self's or another family member. The specific parts that would appeal would be the model that I have used, a teenaged girl this is so that it tells you who its aimed at before you even press play. I knew by using a model this is easy to aim at my audience better, I found all this out when I did my questionnaire. After I had created my questionnaire I knew it would be easy to create my products because I had all the information I needed to help me reach my target audience.
  • 9. Feedback 1 What did you like about the product? It was very realistic and It was well done and put together in the video with the tips and how to do it. It was very effective and did make you cringe at the realism but it was great! What improvements could have been made to the product? The video went a bit fast not giving you a lot of time to read it so it could slow down just a little to get the full effect
  • 10. Feedback 2 What did you like about the product? I liked all the different special effects makeup as they where really detailed and realistic. I also liked the transitions between the different effects. What improvements could have been made to the product? Slow down the time so its not as fast and you can see the video in more detail.
  • 11. Feedback 3 What did you like about the product? I liked each tutorial, they were all great in there own way. I thought the general skill to do the make up was amazing, it looked real! overall I thought the video was amazing What improvements could have been made to the product? I felt as if the video was going a bit to fast for my liking, it could have been a bit slower, also the text could of stayed on the screen for a bit longer.
  • 12. PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY What do you agree with from your peer feedback? I agree with all of the feed back that the video could do with been slowed down and it is hard to watch and read because it goes so fast, from this it my put my audience off from watching it doesn’t give them time. I also like the fact they have said that it looks realistic, its almost like its professional and will get picked up from the industry meaning my work might get spotted. What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? They is nothing that I don’t agree with all the feed back is something that needs to be done.
  • 13. PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY Based on my feed back I would improve on the speed of my video, make it slower and make the text last longer so my audience will be able to read and them that struggle to read fast don’t have to worry about stopping and starting the video, if they have to stop and start the video they wont get the idea of the atmosphere that I’m trying to create with the look. This will benefit my audience in the long run as they will be happy to watch the videos that I am producing and will learn from watching them and tell other people about the videos gaining me more subscribers because of the quality of my videos.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  5. Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?