1. Writing Evaluation
Name: Panpan Date: 17 June 2009
Recount: The Great Mauao Exposition: School Uniform
Level: 3 Level: 3
Explanation: I can develop personally significant Explanation: I started to develop ideas and elaborate
thought but can't explore a personally meaningful ideas but can't develop ideas with significant detail
event and use substantial illustration to support the and elaboration.
theme. I started to organize and link ideas logically and use
I can use most conventions of grammar correctly. conjunction for showing result.
I can use a variety of sentence structure, with some I can spell most high-frequency words correctly.
short and punchy but can't shapes ideas for a
meaningful effect.
Writing Goals: I will try to use a variety of sentence structures for effect and selects words that clearly
convey my story and felling to my audience. Personal voice apparent-conversational tone and makes attempt
at imagery.