1. For our documentary feedback we got a small focus group to watch the documentary and then fill in the
questionnaire shown below on this slide, this gave us views on our 5 minutes, our print advert and the radio
trailer. We also added the three media pieces on to facebook and asked friends to comment on what they liked
and disliked about the individual pieces and how they thought all three worked together.

2. After making a small group of people talk about our documentary
and collected an array of opinions these are some of the comments
people said........
“The music is relevant and the cutaways used are really creative, lots
of different camera angles.”
“ I love how the opening titles are really creative and the way
you’ve used suitable cutaways throughout the documentary.”
“Good coverage of different opinions and I liked the cutaways
too, I would definitely watch the documentary.”
“The cutaways, interviews and voxpops are very effective. Very
professional.”
“Could have steadier camerawork for cutaways.”
Overall our feedback was very positive, it has shown us that we have
used all our footage effectively and that we have followed the codes
and conventions well as people think it could be a professional
media piece. Feedback has shown that we have covered a variety of
topics because the audience was entertained throughout and have
used our 5 minutes effectively as the audience wants to see more.
However some of the comments from our questionnaires have
shown us that improvements could be made with steadier camera
work and avoiding any background noise. Overall feedback has
shown that the documentary was successful because their was little
critic but many positive said about it.

3. We repeated our process for the radio trailer and these are some
of the comments people said ...........
“It is clear what the documentary is about and it is useful how
you have put the scheduling information in at the end. I like how
you have used the same music that was in the documentary,
linking them together.”
“ I like the way there is small cuts of different interviews
integrated into it so that you get a feel for the kind of stuff going
to be in the documentary. Would make me want too watch it.”
“ I like the format and content.”
“Think the last line is really good, would make me watch.”
A common comment we got in our feedback for the radio trailer
was how much people enjoyed the last line, our slogan “You
coming out to play?” the use of direct address really grabs the
attention of the audience which makes them feel involved, I
think this is the reason that it was so popular. I have seen from
the feedback that people enjoyed the topic and how we were
representing it, as they felt we covered a good range of different
topics.

4. Our final process of feedback was on our print advert here are some of the comments people said .............
“I like the main image because it is striking”.
“The advert would encourage me to watch the documentary, I like the contrast of images.”
“I like the facial expression of the person in the advert, it conveys that she is addicted to the game and ignoring the toys giving an outline to the
documentary.”
I have learnt from the feedback that the print advert makes people want to watch the documentary because of its eye catching image and its use of
direct address “You coming out to play?” which makes people feel more involved. I have also seen that people like the print advert because they
think that it looks professional showing that we have followed the codes and conventions well, are feedback shows that this piece of media links well
with the documentary and radio trailer , as people know they are related because they share the same title name, slogan and has the channel 4 logo.
Audience feedback has shown that the image works well because it conveys the message of our documentary and grabs the audience attention.