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Storytelling: Simple Tips for Developing High Impact Content for Increased Audience Engagement.
1. Lisa DuBois Low
Director of Communications & Multimedia
Texas Tech Alumni Association
@ldlow | #prdisruption
Storytelling: Simple Tips
for Developing High Impact
Content for Increased
Audience Engagement.
7. SEE what I mean?
Shorter sentences in fewer paragraphs
Heads, subheads, call-outs, cutlines
Bullet points
Plain English
”Walk” not “ambulate”
No shop talk
15. HEY!
I’M TALKING TO YOU!
– Make it personal “you” and
“I” and “we” are preferred in
the right context.
#PRDISRUPTION
16. SEE what I mean?
Use emotional language
The first sentence in a paragraph
Can stand alone
Should capture attention
Can be only one sentence!
Subheads should be
Action words, compelling, motivating
Sentence fragments are OK
Really! For variety! For emphasis!
Use slang at your peril
Let me tell you why. My favorite definition of a good storyteller is from a leadership recruitment firm
1. Good storytellers make an emotional connection with their audience.
A good storyteller is not somebody who relies solely on fact or appeals only to people’s rationality. A good storyteller is somebody who creates a deep emotional bond with their audience.
2. Good storytellers engage their listeners.
Good storytellers don’t just pique your interest — they capture your imagination. They make it so you can’t help but become involved in their stories.
3. Good storytellers are exceptional talkers, but even better listeners.
Listening plays such an important role because storytelling is just as much about receiving feedback as it is about transmitting the message — and in order for a story to be well-received, you first have to know who’s on the other end. They read body language and audience responses.
But guess what, you aren’t face to face with your audience most of the time. And they don’t have the time or interest to read through your boring copy, no matter how brilliant you think it is.
When you’re telling me a story, you better know what it is. Have you talked about nut graphs? It’s the newsworthy element of your story.
I’m more likely to pay attention when you follow the five“c’s.” Be Clear, Concise, Compelling. Which means you have to know the story backwards and forwards. Be Consistent. No one likes an inconsistent story. But an engaging and compelling story, we want to hear again and again. Use a call to action: any ideas what might qualify? Read more, buy now, join now, rsvp, like, RT, etc.
I use these 5 c’s frequently in my own writing.
Literally help your audience SEE what you are SAYING them. Bring your story to life with photos, illustrations, pull quotes, cutlines, infographics, etc. Don’t have a budget? Free images are everywhere. Chances are your smart phone is perfect for many shots. Free sources include Microsoft Office, StockXchange, Flickr, Morgue file and wikipedia. I believe the library also offers royalty free images. Just make sure before you use something that you’re not guilty of stealing/copyright violations.
People are visual creatures. Straight, dense text, no matter how good the story is just won’t cut it. Visuals also go a long way in telling your story in a few seconds. When I developed Texas Tech Today, my goal for each story was to convey the heart of it in the headline, blurb, subheads, images and cutline so our readers could grasp it in just a few seconds. Ask anyone who has ever worked for me how much emphasis I put on these elements. They’ll probably get PTSD flashbacks.
Let’s look at an example. I’m a dog lover and rescue advocate. I’ve worked with most of the animal rescue in Lubbock. Let’s look at Lubbock Animal Services. What’s cuter than a bunch of orphaned puppies getting new owners? Storytelling opportunities GALORE. Right?
Shorter sentences in fewer paragraphs
Heads, subheads, call-outs, cutlines
Bullet points
Plain English
”Walk” not “ambulate”
No shop talk
Why use a word like circumvent. Discuss web page.
Great storytellers know who they are talking to. Your audience can’t be EVERYONE. The difference between a d good storyteller and a great one … they don’t just take the time to find out who their audience is; they also take the time to figure out the type of messages their audience is most likely to be receptive to. Then they tailor their message specifically to that audience.
Great storytellers know it’s all about communication, and communication is a two way street. Social media has turned PR and brand management into the wild, wild west where we have limited control. To me, at it’s heart, brand management is now a conversation.
Knowing WHO their audience is and WHERE is just as important. Because WHERE dictates how much or how little space you have to grab their attention. And guess what, they aren’t just in one place. They have laptops, desktops, smart phones, tablets. They visit your website, sign up for email, follow you on social, receive your direct mail. You’ve got to surround sound, multimedia, multiplatform. STRATEGIC. My goal for each and every platform is to connect with my audience where they are. Make it easy for them to connect with me.
So where do you start. I put everything in a pile. Whatever reference material I think I might need. Old materials, brochures, news releases, articles, social posts. The bigger the project, the bigger the pile and the more I put myself in my audience’s place (personas), I role play, I brainstorm with my team, with my friends, with my family.
My facebook and twitter friends are sometimes guinea pigs. I test, test, test. I nearly always end up with more than I need. Then I apply the 5 c’s. Copy that doesn’t meet those criteria I save for future projects (you can never have too much content).
I go from large to small.
Press release to magazine story to web story to email;
Facebook, Tumblr, Insta; ending with Twitter.
The story gets smaller, tighter, more active, likeable and sharable as it goes. It’s amazing how concise you can be when forced into 140 characters.
Now a word about social. The obvious questions are, “is this likeable?” “shareable” Retweetable. I’ll let you in on a little secret. People share all kinds of stuff without really reading it.
Now it’s time to BREAK THE RULES.
Before you BREAK the rules,
you must LEARN them.
if you aspire to be a communicator of any kind…employers and colleagues might overlook it a time or two, but it’s
NOT ACCEPTABLE.
My high school freshman pointed out that his English teacher doesn’t allow them to do many of the things I’m advocating. I get it, rules are important. Breaking the rules is not the same thing as being ignorant of them.
Every time a PR writer uses passive voice, a kitten dies.
Don’t be that guy. Just don’t do it.
Write like you speak.
Sentences in active voice are more concise than those in passive voice because fewer words are required to express action in active voice than in passive. But guess what, you can’t use active voice for earned media. Know the rules.
For example “The TTAA will hold a pregame party at the Frazier Alumni Pavilion.” How about, “Join us at the Frazier Alumni Pavilion pregame party.”
Make it personal “you” and “I” and “we” are preferred in the right context. Remember, storytellers engage and connect. The fastest way to do that is to talk to me like I’m a human. Have a conversation with your audience. Again, this is a no-no for earned media.
Don’t give me a press release and pretend it’s a story. A press release is an excellent place to START! If earned media is important to your organization, ALWAYS start with a release and work your way down. ALWAYS start with your nut graph, ask yourself, what the story is.
Use emotional language
The first sentence in a paragraph
Can stand alone
Should capture attention
Can be only one sentence!
Subheads should be
Action words, compelling, motivating
Sentence fragments are OK
Really! For variety! For emphasis!
Use slang and hashtags at your peril … and put quotes around the slang.
Listen first, speak second. PR and communications professionals always have their ear to the ground. They read local, regional and global news. The eavesdrop on their competition. Information is power. It would be tone deaf for me to promote alcoholic beverages at the Frazier Alumni Pavilion in the midst of the breaking news about the student who died from alcohol poisoning.
Nearly everything can be measured for free. Use Google Analytics and each platform typically has some analytics. Klout will give you a relative measurement of all.
What works? What doesn’t?
Listen to the feedback you receive on social.
Let’s recap, shall we?
How do you grow superior writing AKA storytelling skills? According to Dave Kerpen of Likeable Media.
Read, write and tweet. Daily.
Follow both Kerpen and Likeable Media and read the article: http://www.linkedin.com/today/post/article/20130221123241-15077789-want-to-be-taken-seriously-become-a-better-writer
So let’s practice.
Any questions before we start?
I’m going to show a short video. Then I’m going to ask you which of my storytelling superpowers I used to write and produce it. AND I want you to tell me who my audience is.
Now, I’m going to help you with your homework. Let’s craft some tweets about what you’ve learned about storytelling today.
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