1) The deaths of several members of the Bloom family in the small town of Everdeen has sparked anger in the community. Twins Eliza and Ivy Bloom are the only remaining members. 2) Eliza finds loose handcuffs and a knife in her home and seems confused and uncertain about what is happening, as the sound of Ivy shaking pills outside continues in a rhythmic pattern. 3) Eliza leaves her home and walks to the police station where she talks with her colleague, Detective Mason. Ivy watches them from a distance before leaving pills on the ground and walking away.

1. EXT.BLANK SCREEN
REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The tragic deaths of several members of
the Bloom family has sparked rage within
the small community of Everdeen . Though
not the first family to suffer this fate
let us hope it's the last. The twins are
the only ones left. ELIZA and IVY Bloom
were so close before-
FADE OUT
EXT. DAY. STREET.
FADE IN
IVY, an eccentrically dressed woman with brown hair of average
height, walks past ELIZA's (IVY'S twin) house shaking a tub of
pills.
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
ELIZA, a professional woman with brown hair of average height,
is inside the house also shaking a tub of pills creating a
synchronous rhythmic sound to clash with the music in the
background.
TITLE: FRACTURE
ELIZA stands in front of a mirror dressed in smart casual
clothing, she turns to the left. ELIZA looks down at her wrist
showing her watch.
FLASHBACK TO:
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
IVY stands in front of the mirror laughing and smiling at her
appearance. She wears casual clothes and leaves quickly when she
hears rustling noise in the house.
PRESENT
ELIZA looks on the ground at a loose pair of handcuffs, then at a
clear glistening knife nearby, her eyes go to family photos then
back to the knife and looks down at the floor.
Radio turns on.
Comment [A1]: Not many people live
around this area.
Comment [A2]: Eliza and Ivy are
twins
Comment [A3]: Ivy often breaks the
laws and cares more about her
appearance and therefore is dressed is
dressed informally. She wears a blue t-
shirt with angels on it.
Comment [A4]: The pills play an
important role in our film as it prevents
her from getting ill.
Comment [A5]: Eliza cares about her
job and therefore is dressed formally
she wears a white formal t-shirt with
black trousers and black shoes.
Comment [A6]: Eliza is an
independent lady and has her own
house.
Comment [A7]: Eliza smart casual
clothes
Comment [A8]: Ivy is very different
compared to her sister, Eliza. Ivy is
laughing at Eliza which implies she’s
unsupportive of her sisters decisions.
Comment [A9]: Eliza is very confused
and uncertain of what is happening.
She finds a loose pair of handcuffs on
the ground.

2. REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The murderous serial killer responsible
for the deaths of many is yet to be found.
Who will they strike next? Should we be
losing faith in our police?
ELIZA stares down at the knife that is in her hand confused.
The sound of the pills shaking starts again and she drops the
knife causing a clanging sound to fill the space. She picks up
the knife places it back where it was and leaves the house.
The shaking pills stops.
ELIZA runs her hands through her hair and leaves.
EXT. DAY. STREET.
ELIZA makes her way to work passing the graveyard on the way
there, her eyes drift to the gravestones lingering on one longer
than the others, she shakes her head and continues walking.
ELIZA walks up to the police station as MASON walks out. He is a
dark haired tall police detective, her colleague. They are having
an inaudible conversation as the pill shaking grows louder. ELIZA
looks behind her feeling eyes on her.
IVY watches from the distance resting on a tree. She pours some
pills onto the floor and walks away leaving them in the grass.
ELIZA leaves MASON with a quick goodbye and walks away clasping
her hands together.
On her street again she looks around before entering her house
again.
Comment [A10]: She’s confused on
what is happening.
Comment [A11]: She doesn’t know
what to do, and places the knife back
and walks away casually.
Comment [A12]: Eliza’s parents were
barried in the graveyard and whenever
she walks past the graveyard she
always remembers them.
Comment [A13]: Eliza’s workplace
Comment [A14]: Mason is Eliza’s
friend he wears a black suit and is a
police detective.