EXT.BLANK SCREEN
REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The tragic deaths of several members of
the Bloom family has sparked rage within
the small community of Oxshot. Though
not the first family to suffer this fate let us
hope it's the last. The twins are the only
ones left. ELIZA and IVY Bloom were so
close before-
FADE OUT
EXT. DAY. STREET.
FADE IN
IVY, an eccentrically dressed woman with brown hair of average
height, walks past ELIZA's (IVY'S twin) house shaking a tub of
pills.
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
ELIZA, a professional woman with brown hair of average height,
is inside the house also shaking a tub of pills creating a
synchronous rhythmic sound to clash with the music in the
background.
TITLE: FRACTURE
ELIZA stands in front of a mirror dressed in smart casual clothing,
she turns to the left. ELIZA looks down at her wrist showing her
watch.
FLASHBACK TO:
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
IVY stands in front of the mirror laughing and smiling at her
appearance. She wears casual clothes and leaves quickly when
she hears rustling noise in the house.
PRESENT
ELIZA looks on the ground at a loose pair of handcuffs, then at a
clear glistening knife nearby, her eyes go to family photos then
back to the knife and looks down at the floor.
Radio turns on.
REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The murderous serial killer responsible for
the deaths of many is yet to be found.
Who will they strike next? Should we be
losing faith in our police?
ELIZA stares down at the knife that is in her hand confused.
The sound of the pills shaking starts again and she drops the knife
causing a clanging sound to fill the space. She picks up the knife
places it back where it was and leaves the house.
The shaking pills stops.
ELIZA runs her hands through her hair and leaves.
EXT. DAY. STREET.
ELIZA makes her way to work passing the graveyard on the way
there, her eyes drift to the gravestones lingering on one longer
than the others, she shakes her head and continues walking.
ELIZA walks up to the police station as MASON walks out. He is a
dark haired tall police detective, her colleague. They are having an
inaudible conversation as the pill shaking grows louder. ELIZA
looks behind her feeling eyes on her.
IVY watches from the distance resting on a tree. She pours some
pills onto the floor and walks away leaving them in the grass.
ELIZA leaves MASON with a quick goodbye and walks away
clasping her hands together.
On her street again she looks around before entering her house
again.

Script 3-Fracture

  • 1.
    EXT.BLANK SCREEN REPORTER (VOICEOVER) The tragic deaths of several members of the Bloom family has sparked rage within the small community of Oxshot. Though not the first family to suffer this fate let us hope it's the last. The twins are the only ones left. ELIZA and IVY Bloom were so close before- FADE OUT EXT. DAY. STREET. FADE IN IVY, an eccentrically dressed woman with brown hair of average height, walks past ELIZA's (IVY'S twin) house shaking a tub of pills. INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD. ELIZA, a professional woman with brown hair of average height, is inside the house also shaking a tub of pills creating a synchronous rhythmic sound to clash with the music in the background. TITLE: FRACTURE ELIZA stands in front of a mirror dressed in smart casual clothing, she turns to the left. ELIZA looks down at her wrist showing her watch. FLASHBACK TO: INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD. IVY stands in front of the mirror laughing and smiling at her appearance. She wears casual clothes and leaves quickly when she hears rustling noise in the house. PRESENT ELIZA looks on the ground at a loose pair of handcuffs, then at a clear glistening knife nearby, her eyes go to family photos then back to the knife and looks down at the floor. Radio turns on. REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
  • 2.
    The murderous serialkiller responsible for the deaths of many is yet to be found. Who will they strike next? Should we be losing faith in our police? ELIZA stares down at the knife that is in her hand confused. The sound of the pills shaking starts again and she drops the knife causing a clanging sound to fill the space. She picks up the knife places it back where it was and leaves the house. The shaking pills stops. ELIZA runs her hands through her hair and leaves. EXT. DAY. STREET. ELIZA makes her way to work passing the graveyard on the way there, her eyes drift to the gravestones lingering on one longer than the others, she shakes her head and continues walking. ELIZA walks up to the police station as MASON walks out. He is a dark haired tall police detective, her colleague. They are having an inaudible conversation as the pill shaking grows louder. ELIZA looks behind her feeling eyes on her. IVY watches from the distance resting on a tree. She pours some pills onto the floor and walks away leaving them in the grass. ELIZA leaves MASON with a quick goodbye and walks away clasping her hands together. On her street again she looks around before entering her house again.