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EXT. EMPTY STREET, NIGHT.

Empty Street, camera edges slowly towards isolated house (lights on from inside living room)
no car is on the drive way, it is a cold winter’s night.

INT. HALL WAY

Shot switches to hand held camera as scene changes to inside the hall way of the house, the
camera moves slowly towards the only lit door way and stands in the door frame showing a
young girl, called Alicesat at the sofa.

INT. LIVING ROOM

The television is on and she is in pyjamas. There are two sofas and Alice is sat comfortably
on a blue three seater.

 Through the two double doors situated at the back of the room, a dark figure is seen through
                           the window. Alice does not notice.

                                        INTRUDERS:

 The first intruder comes in through the front door; Alice notices and screams with panic. As
         the first intruder grabs her, the second breaks in and joins in with the assault.

 (Lots of shouting and throwing things about make lots of intimidating noises; run down the
hall way and into the living room where the young girl is situated.) The intruders are wearing
                            dark clothes and masks over their faces.

INT. HALL WAY

                                           ALICE:



 (Screams but is violently attacked and smothered with one of the intruders hand to stop her
screaming.)They all grab her and drag her viciously through the hall way; intruder number 1
 pulls Alice by her hair, the second intruder punches her so that Alice is knocked out and the
                             carry her limp body through the house.

   Fast paced editing is used here to have a greater impact and so the intruder’s identity is
                                       never fully seen.

EXT. FRONT OF THE HOUSE

Outside the front of the house is an average front garden, well kept, plant pots situated on the
patio to the right of the back door. The intruders carry Alice’s lifeless body out the back door
and carry her to where a black car is waiting with the boot open. In the boot is rope, duct
tape, knife and other weaponry. Intruder number 3 grabs the duct tape and 1 and 2 place
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Alice’s body in the boot. Intruder number one duct tapes her mouth and hands together. All
three get in the car and the car drives away off down the road with Alice in the boot.

EXT. COUNTRY ROAD

Car is filmed driving along an old road in the middle of the countryside, still very cold and
dark. The area is isolated and the trees are well built up.

The car lights disappear into the darkness.

EXT. DERELICT BUILDING

The derelict building is very old and run down, it has been burnt down and neglected over a
long period of time with lots of rubbish and rubble scattered everywhere.

The car pulls up and out get all of the intruders; they open the boot Alice, still out cold, is
shown inside. The carry her body through into the woods and lay her flaccid body on the
dirty ground. The screen turns black.

Still at the derelict building, a few hours have passed. It is the early hours of the morning as it
is gradually getting lighter. Camera focuses closely on Alice’s face as she slowly wakes up,
and intruder 2 is ready and waiting and with one blow, knocks her out cold again. The screen
turns black.

EXT. DERELICT BUILDING

Alice wakes up again, and is now alone in a place she doesn’t know. Close up on her to show
her bloody and bruised face. Her clothes are dirty and very slowly she manages to break her
 hands free. She takes off the duct tape on her mouth, says nothing, and sees a knife on the
              floor and smiles and eerie, evil smile. The turns black. The end.

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  • 1.
    Chloe Mason Script Writing Media EXT.EMPTY STREET, NIGHT. Empty Street, camera edges slowly towards isolated house (lights on from inside living room) no car is on the drive way, it is a cold winter’s night. INT. HALL WAY Shot switches to hand held camera as scene changes to inside the hall way of the house, the camera moves slowly towards the only lit door way and stands in the door frame showing a young girl, called Alicesat at the sofa. INT. LIVING ROOM The television is on and she is in pyjamas. There are two sofas and Alice is sat comfortably on a blue three seater. Through the two double doors situated at the back of the room, a dark figure is seen through the window. Alice does not notice. INTRUDERS: The first intruder comes in through the front door; Alice notices and screams with panic. As the first intruder grabs her, the second breaks in and joins in with the assault. (Lots of shouting and throwing things about make lots of intimidating noises; run down the hall way and into the living room where the young girl is situated.) The intruders are wearing dark clothes and masks over their faces. INT. HALL WAY ALICE: (Screams but is violently attacked and smothered with one of the intruders hand to stop her screaming.)They all grab her and drag her viciously through the hall way; intruder number 1 pulls Alice by her hair, the second intruder punches her so that Alice is knocked out and the carry her limp body through the house. Fast paced editing is used here to have a greater impact and so the intruder’s identity is never fully seen. EXT. FRONT OF THE HOUSE Outside the front of the house is an average front garden, well kept, plant pots situated on the patio to the right of the back door. The intruders carry Alice’s lifeless body out the back door and carry her to where a black car is waiting with the boot open. In the boot is rope, duct tape, knife and other weaponry. Intruder number 3 grabs the duct tape and 1 and 2 place
  • 2.
    Chloe Mason Script Writing Media Alice’sbody in the boot. Intruder number one duct tapes her mouth and hands together. All three get in the car and the car drives away off down the road with Alice in the boot. EXT. COUNTRY ROAD Car is filmed driving along an old road in the middle of the countryside, still very cold and dark. The area is isolated and the trees are well built up. The car lights disappear into the darkness. EXT. DERELICT BUILDING The derelict building is very old and run down, it has been burnt down and neglected over a long period of time with lots of rubbish and rubble scattered everywhere. The car pulls up and out get all of the intruders; they open the boot Alice, still out cold, is shown inside. The carry her body through into the woods and lay her flaccid body on the dirty ground. The screen turns black. Still at the derelict building, a few hours have passed. It is the early hours of the morning as it is gradually getting lighter. Camera focuses closely on Alice’s face as she slowly wakes up, and intruder 2 is ready and waiting and with one blow, knocks her out cold again. The screen turns black. EXT. DERELICT BUILDING Alice wakes up again, and is now alone in a place she doesn’t know. Close up on her to show her bloody and bruised face. Her clothes are dirty and very slowly she manages to break her hands free. She takes off the duct tape on her mouth, says nothing, and sees a knife on the floor and smiles and eerie, evil smile. The turns black. The end.