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1) Subject specific sentence starters
Stretch and challenge
• Making writing specific to your subject
How does Sport England face the
challenges of getting more people
participating in sport?
GCSE PE Unit 7
Sport England
The identification of……
Their aim to…..
The protection of…..
Investing in new……
Governing body scrutiny……
The ‘Sportivate’ initiative…...
If sports fail…..
2) The art of the sentence….
Stretch and challenge
• Highlighting the skill and craft needed for expert sentences
Explain how religion affects a persons participation in sport:
Q1) “The effect of religious beliefs………..”
Sport England is a complex organisation with many strategies and aims.
Q2) In one sentence, explain the role of Sport England:
Q3) What is the influence of the media in sport, and how does it effect its
organisation?
3) Modelling great writing
Showing what great writing looks like
• Choose a piece of work or student answer
• Share it
• Annotate (on the white board) the key points
• Pull out excellent keywords or sentences
• Can you pull it all together (with the class) to show how you
would go about creating an answer?
• What is your thought process?
• Why have you decided to start a paragraph a certain way?
Model the entire process – show them – teach them – help them
learn
3) Modelling great writing
Use a visualiser
4) Literacy upgrade
Improving writing piece by piece
• Vocabulary, specific terminology, sentence starters…
4) Critique
Drafting and crafting
• 5-10 minutes at the start of any lesson
• Call work ‘drafts’
• Ensure space is left after work to redraft
• Get students to work on feedback comments
first
• Use the DIRT strategies for those who have
finished any work – “If it’s not perfect it’s not
finished”
• Close the gap
4) Critique
Drafting and crafting
5) Format Matters
Speaking academically
Original sentence: “He’s giving them roles like the people in Russia.”
Add specific references replace pronouns and vague nouns: “Orwell is giving the pigs roles like
the leaders in the Russian Revolution.”
Add more rigorous syntax: “Orwell gives the pigs roles like those of the leaders of the Russian
Revolution.”
Add key details, facts and evidence: “Orwell gives the pigs roles like those of Lenin, Trotsky,
and other leaders of the Russian Revolution.”
Upgrade to precise academic vocabulary: “Orwell uses pigs to personify Lenin, Trotsky, and
other leaders of the Russian Revolution.”

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Raising Academic Standards - 5 Strategies

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  • 2. 1) Subject specific sentence starters Stretch and challenge • Making writing specific to your subject
  • 3. How does Sport England face the challenges of getting more people participating in sport? GCSE PE Unit 7 Sport England The identification of…… Their aim to….. The protection of….. Investing in new…… Governing body scrutiny…… The ‘Sportivate’ initiative…... If sports fail…..
  • 4. 2) The art of the sentence…. Stretch and challenge • Highlighting the skill and craft needed for expert sentences Explain how religion affects a persons participation in sport: Q1) “The effect of religious beliefs………..” Sport England is a complex organisation with many strategies and aims. Q2) In one sentence, explain the role of Sport England: Q3) What is the influence of the media in sport, and how does it effect its organisation?
  • 5. 3) Modelling great writing Showing what great writing looks like • Choose a piece of work or student answer • Share it • Annotate (on the white board) the key points • Pull out excellent keywords or sentences • Can you pull it all together (with the class) to show how you would go about creating an answer? • What is your thought process? • Why have you decided to start a paragraph a certain way? Model the entire process – show them – teach them – help them learn
  • 6. 3) Modelling great writing Use a visualiser
  • 7. 4) Literacy upgrade Improving writing piece by piece • Vocabulary, specific terminology, sentence starters…
  • 9. • 5-10 minutes at the start of any lesson • Call work ‘drafts’ • Ensure space is left after work to redraft • Get students to work on feedback comments first • Use the DIRT strategies for those who have finished any work – “If it’s not perfect it’s not finished” • Close the gap 4) Critique Drafting and crafting
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  • 11. 5) Format Matters Speaking academically Original sentence: “He’s giving them roles like the people in Russia.” Add specific references replace pronouns and vague nouns: “Orwell is giving the pigs roles like the leaders in the Russian Revolution.” Add more rigorous syntax: “Orwell gives the pigs roles like those of the leaders of the Russian Revolution.” Add key details, facts and evidence: “Orwell gives the pigs roles like those of Lenin, Trotsky, and other leaders of the Russian Revolution.” Upgrade to precise academic vocabulary: “Orwell uses pigs to personify Lenin, Trotsky, and other leaders of the Russian Revolution.”

Editor's Notes

  1. Doug Lemov – At first glance – Great for all abilities. Only 3 words though!
  2. Taking complex idea and skilfully refining it to a single sentence.
  3. Task – Model a great answer
  4. iPhone, visualiser or camera. Doug Lemov ‘Show call’.