The document compares the student's preliminary task to their coursework task, noting several improvements: 1) The preliminary task lacked structure and layout, while the coursework task has a better structured layout that follows the eye's route. 2) The image used in the preliminary task was low quality and stretched, whereas the coursework task uses a better shot type without deformities. 3) The coursework magazine uses colors that match the genre of rock music more closely, unlike the preliminary task. 4) The poster images in the coursework task are all the same size and fit with the magazine, unlike random images used in the preliminary task.