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looking back at you preliminary task,
  what do you feel you have learnt
     from it to the full product?
First front cover
       This was my first task to do and this is
       what my front cover looked like before i
       had learnt anything about the layout etc.

       I can now tell that the colours that i have
       used aren't that clear at some point on
       the page and that the layout isn't clear
       either.

       The cover lines aren't clear and they
       don't make no sense or link into each
       other.

       Also now i can say that i don't think that i
       thought this front cover through properly
       and that the whole front cover itself is
       not good but it doesn't relate to any of
       the codes and conventions of media.
Contents page
    With this contents page i think that there is too
    much white space and that the layout doesn't
    look professional.

    The images that i chosen to use for the
    contents page are not that clear and they
    wouldn't make people want to go and buy the
    magazine.

    The pictures aren't in line with each other and
    that is why it doesn't look professional .

    On the images you cant really see the page
    number on which is also a big thing that people
    need to see when they are looking the images.
New front cover
     This is my new front cover after i had learnt all
     about the different codes and conventions.

     The image on this front cover stands out and it
     looks more dominate, and the use of direct
     address makes the magazine look professional.

     The colours look better as in they are all mostly
     the same colour but as on the other one there
     was more that one different colour for the
     cover lines which didn't look good at all.

     I think that this time round with the front
     cover it looks much better as i had picked up
     the skills from using photoshop.
Contents page
    This is the newer contents page, this looks
    much better as it is spaced out more and the
    layout with the images and the text looks more
    professional.

    These images are clear and they are all in line
    with each other which they weren't on the
    other one.

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Looking back at you preliminary task, what

  • 1. looking back at you preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt from it to the full product?
  • 2. First front cover This was my first task to do and this is what my front cover looked like before i had learnt anything about the layout etc. I can now tell that the colours that i have used aren't that clear at some point on the page and that the layout isn't clear either. The cover lines aren't clear and they don't make no sense or link into each other. Also now i can say that i don't think that i thought this front cover through properly and that the whole front cover itself is not good but it doesn't relate to any of the codes and conventions of media.
  • 3. Contents page With this contents page i think that there is too much white space and that the layout doesn't look professional. The images that i chosen to use for the contents page are not that clear and they wouldn't make people want to go and buy the magazine. The pictures aren't in line with each other and that is why it doesn't look professional . On the images you cant really see the page number on which is also a big thing that people need to see when they are looking the images.
  • 4. New front cover This is my new front cover after i had learnt all about the different codes and conventions. The image on this front cover stands out and it looks more dominate, and the use of direct address makes the magazine look professional. The colours look better as in they are all mostly the same colour but as on the other one there was more that one different colour for the cover lines which didn't look good at all. I think that this time round with the front cover it looks much better as i had picked up the skills from using photoshop.
  • 5. Contents page This is the newer contents page, this looks much better as it is spaced out more and the layout with the images and the text looks more professional. These images are clear and they are all in line with each other which they weren't on the other one.