SlideShare a Scribd company logo
Evaluation question 2.
What have you learnt from your
audience research
Obtaining feedback
Obtaining audience feedback was a crucial aspect of my
coursework throughout, both during the pre-production and
post-production stage. It helped ensure that I was on the right
track and rather than waiting till the end I took in points of
improvement throughout and this benefited me as I then had
less points to improve at the end and therefore ended up
being closer to my wanted end result. Furthermore the
feedback obtained came from my potential target audience,
meaning that all points made were relevant to my work and
by taking in their feedback I was able to get to know my
audience better.
Audience
Most of my feedback came from students that attend my
school as it was the most practical way of getting opinions
from people who I knew would fit into my target audience.
Both students and teachers with ages that ranged from 12-
50+ were part of my focus groups that took place at non-
systematic times throughout my post/pre-production.
However I only filmed one of them which I decided to upload
onto my blog, as a lot of people did not have enough time to
get seated and filmed whilst giving me feedback.
LINK TO FOCUS GROUP:
http://laurenaetwi.wordpress.com/2014/03/04/focus-group/
What did I learn
From this focus group specifically, I learnt that in my final
trailer my edits and scenes were effective as they really
helped convey emotions, and tell the story (speaker 1). I was
also told that the narrative was understood very well and this
encouraged speaker 2 to feel intrigued enough to want to
watch the whole movie. We also reflected back on how I
improved my previous trailer and how that led me to achieve
my final version.
Due to technological convergence and advances It was a lot
easier to reach to a lot of people at the same time globally. I
for example used survey monkey to design and put together
a survey which people had to fill in online so that I could find a
potential focus group which would be suitable for my film.
The link was put onto my
WordPress and I also put flyers
out in my school which had a QR
code that directed them from
their smartphones directly to it.
The QR code is one example of
technological advances
simplifying communication as it is
an efficient and up to date way of
sharing information such as links.
Apart from the Survey that I designed I also asked verbal
feedback throughout the making of my media products, I did
this to make sure that I was on the right track and this
prevented me from drifting off. This also guided and helped
me understand what was expected to be included in a
promotional package, as I did struggle with this at the start of
my media foundation portfolio.
Continuation…
Audience feedback specifically kept me on track when making
drafts for my cover, I needed feedback from my audience so
that I could then go on to design my final product including
everything that people may have pointed out or commented
on in my feedback. My verbal feedback included questions
such as “Which of the three designs seems more suitable for a
crime/fiction movie” and “Mention two things that you would
add to this poster, if you don’t have any mention two things
you feel stand out on this poster and why”
One of the platforms used to ask for feedback was
‘FaceBook’ and because this is a frequently used one,
including by my potential target audience since it is very
wide spread, it was a useful attempt. Had I gotten any
feedback then this would have helped me see if my work
achieved its aim and suited the genre I had chosen for it, but
I unfortunately did not receive any feedback.

More Related Content

What's hot

Question 3
Question 3Question 3
Question 3
twsycfc
 
Q3
Q3Q3
What have you learned from audience feedback?
What have you learned from audience feedback?What have you learned from audience feedback?
What have you learned from audience feedback?
shaunliddle
 
Question 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media EvaluationQuestion 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media Evaluation
11-ipai
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
ow11309
 
Quesion 3 eval
Quesion 3 evalQuesion 3 eval
Quesion 3 eval
ellie_bird
 
Evaluation Four and Five
Evaluation Four and FiveEvaluation Four and Five
Evaluation Four and Five
Georgiammedia
 
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Daniel Hunt
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
Matteo Rimini
 
Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3r.aayman
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
Isabella Christodoulou
 
Question 5
Question 5Question 5
Question 5hufan
 
Question 3 evaluation
Question 3 evaluationQuestion 3 evaluation
Question 3 evaluationhayleefynn
 
Final presentation
Final presentationFinal presentation
Final presentationflowerdisc
 
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)Research methods worksheet (unit 1)
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)chappleaaron00
 
Top 10 List From Intro To Pr
Top 10 List From Intro To PrTop 10 List From Intro To Pr
Top 10 List From Intro To Prkarnwine
 

What's hot (20)

Question 3
Question 3Question 3
Question 3
 
Q3
Q3Q3
Q3
 
LO3
LO3LO3
LO3
 
What have you learned from audience feedback?
What have you learned from audience feedback?What have you learned from audience feedback?
What have you learned from audience feedback?
 
Evaluation questions
Evaluation questionsEvaluation questions
Evaluation questions
 
Question 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media EvaluationQuestion 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media Evaluation
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Quesion 3 eval
Quesion 3 evalQuesion 3 eval
Quesion 3 eval
 
Evaluation Four and Five
Evaluation Four and FiveEvaluation Four and Five
Evaluation Four and Five
 
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Q3) What have you learned from your audience feedback?
 
Evaluation Q3
Evaluation Q3Evaluation Q3
Evaluation Q3
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Question
Question Question
Question
 
Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Question 5
Question 5Question 5
Question 5
 
Question 3 evaluation
Question 3 evaluationQuestion 3 evaluation
Question 3 evaluation
 
Final presentation
Final presentationFinal presentation
Final presentation
 
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)Research methods worksheet (unit 1)
Research methods worksheet (unit 1)
 
Top 10 List From Intro To Pr
Top 10 List From Intro To PrTop 10 List From Intro To Pr
Top 10 List From Intro To Pr
 

Similar to Question

What have you done
What have you done What have you done
What have you done
scrumbles_shares
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
sofiahowarth22
 
Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3robbieblaser
 
Evaluation question three
Evaluation question threeEvaluation question three
Evaluation question three
jpgr59
 
Eval 30
Eval 30Eval 30
Eval 30
JoeBowman98
 
Evaluation question three
Evaluation question threeEvaluation question three
Evaluation question three
jpgr59
 
Question 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media EvaluationQuestion 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media Evaluation
11-ipai
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
sofiahowarth22
 
Media eval q 3
Media eval q 3Media eval q 3
Media eval q 3
JessBrown97
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
sofiahowarth22
 
Evaluation question 3 notes pdf
Evaluation question 3 notes pdfEvaluation question 3 notes pdf
Evaluation question 3 notes pdf
Ella Sanderson
 
Evaluation for B1 unit
Evaluation for B1 unitEvaluation for B1 unit
Evaluation for B1 unit
Sophieg8
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3bethgrocott
 
Evaluation B1: Progression
Evaluation B1: ProgressionEvaluation B1: Progression
Evaluation B1: Progression
SophieGibson9
 

Similar to Question (20)

Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3
 
Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3
 
What have you done
What have you done What have you done
What have you done
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Question 3
Question 3Question 3
Question 3
 
Question 3
Question 3Question 3
Question 3
 
Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3Evaluation Question 3
Evaluation Question 3
 
Evaluation question three
Evaluation question threeEvaluation question three
Evaluation question three
 
Eval 30
Eval 30Eval 30
Eval 30
 
Evaluation question three
Evaluation question threeEvaluation question three
Evaluation question three
 
Question 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media EvaluationQuestion 3 Media Evaluation
Question 3 Media Evaluation
 
Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3Evaluation 3
Evaluation 3
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
 
Media eval q 3
Media eval q 3Media eval q 3
Media eval q 3
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedbackWhat have you learned from your audience feedback
What have you learned from your audience feedback
 
Evaluation question 3 notes pdf
Evaluation question 3 notes pdfEvaluation question 3 notes pdf
Evaluation question 3 notes pdf
 
Evaluation for B1 unit
Evaluation for B1 unitEvaluation for B1 unit
Evaluation for B1 unit
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Evaluation B1: Progression
Evaluation B1: ProgressionEvaluation B1: Progression
Evaluation B1: Progression
 

More from Letwi

Film classification research
Film classification research Film classification research
Film classification research Letwi
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Letwi
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Letwi
 
Saul bass
Saul bassSaul bass
Saul bassLetwi
 
Script – Seven steps
Script – Seven stepsScript – Seven steps
Script – Seven steps
Letwi
 
Movie pitch update (1)
Movie pitch update (1)Movie pitch update (1)
Movie pitch update (1)Letwi
 
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draft
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draftProposal for film trailer - 1st draft
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draftLetwi
 

More from Letwi (7)

Film classification research
Film classification research Film classification research
Film classification research
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3 Evaluation question 3
Evaluation question 3
 
Saul bass
Saul bassSaul bass
Saul bass
 
Script – Seven steps
Script – Seven stepsScript – Seven steps
Script – Seven steps
 
Movie pitch update (1)
Movie pitch update (1)Movie pitch update (1)
Movie pitch update (1)
 
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draft
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draftProposal for film trailer - 1st draft
Proposal for film trailer - 1st draft
 

Recently uploaded

PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.pptPROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
bhadouriyakaku
 
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdfBPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
MIGUELANGEL966976
 
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.pptEthernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
azkamurat
 
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power SystemHierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
Kerry Sado
 
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdf
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdfOnline aptitude test management system project report.pdf
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdf
Kamal Acharya
 
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testingPPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
anoopmanoharan2
 
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributionsDfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
gestioneergodomus
 
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part IIIRecycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
Aditya Rajan Patra
 
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptxFundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
manasideore6
 
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
obonagu
 
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTSHeap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
Soumen Santra
 
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
Massimo Talia
 
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
ClaraZara1
 
Building Electrical System Design & Installation
Building Electrical System Design & InstallationBuilding Electrical System Design & Installation
Building Electrical System Design & Installation
symbo111
 
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
bakpo1
 
sieving analysis and results interpretation
sieving analysis and results interpretationsieving analysis and results interpretation
sieving analysis and results interpretation
ssuser36d3051
 
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptxFundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
manasideore6
 
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
zwunae
 
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
Rahul
 
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
SyedAbiiAzazi1
 

Recently uploaded (20)

PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.pptPROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
PROJECT FORMAT FOR EVS AMITY UNIVERSITY GWALIOR.ppt
 
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdfBPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
BPV-GUI-01-Guide-for-ASME-Review-Teams-(General)-10-10-2023.pdf
 
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.pptEthernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
Ethernet Routing and switching chapter 1.ppt
 
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power SystemHierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
Hierarchical Digital Twin of a Naval Power System
 
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdf
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdfOnline aptitude test management system project report.pdf
Online aptitude test management system project report.pdf
 
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testingPPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
PPT on GRP pipes manufacturing and testing
 
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributionsDfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
DfMAy 2024 - key insights and contributions
 
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part IIIRecycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
Recycled Concrete Aggregate in Construction Part III
 
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptxFundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
Fundamentals of Electric Drives and its applications.pptx
 
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
在线办理(ANU毕业证书)澳洲国立大学毕业证录取通知书一模一样
 
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTSHeap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
Heap Sort (SS).ppt FOR ENGINEERING GRADUATES, BCA, MCA, MTECH, BSC STUDENTS
 
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
Nuclear Power Economics and Structuring 2024
 
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
6th International Conference on Machine Learning & Applications (CMLA 2024)
 
Building Electrical System Design & Installation
Building Electrical System Design & InstallationBuilding Electrical System Design & Installation
Building Electrical System Design & Installation
 
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
一比一原版(SFU毕业证)西蒙菲莎大学毕业证成绩单如何办理
 
sieving analysis and results interpretation
sieving analysis and results interpretationsieving analysis and results interpretation
sieving analysis and results interpretation
 
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptxFundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
Fundamentals of Induction Motor Drives.pptx
 
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
一比一原版(UMich毕业证)密歇根大学|安娜堡分校毕业证成绩单专业办理
 
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
ACEP Magazine edition 4th launched on 05.06.2024
 
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
14 Template Contractual Notice - EOT Application
 

Question

  • 1. Evaluation question 2. What have you learnt from your audience research
  • 2. Obtaining feedback Obtaining audience feedback was a crucial aspect of my coursework throughout, both during the pre-production and post-production stage. It helped ensure that I was on the right track and rather than waiting till the end I took in points of improvement throughout and this benefited me as I then had less points to improve at the end and therefore ended up being closer to my wanted end result. Furthermore the feedback obtained came from my potential target audience, meaning that all points made were relevant to my work and by taking in their feedback I was able to get to know my audience better.
  • 3. Audience Most of my feedback came from students that attend my school as it was the most practical way of getting opinions from people who I knew would fit into my target audience. Both students and teachers with ages that ranged from 12- 50+ were part of my focus groups that took place at non- systematic times throughout my post/pre-production. However I only filmed one of them which I decided to upload onto my blog, as a lot of people did not have enough time to get seated and filmed whilst giving me feedback. LINK TO FOCUS GROUP: http://laurenaetwi.wordpress.com/2014/03/04/focus-group/
  • 4. What did I learn From this focus group specifically, I learnt that in my final trailer my edits and scenes were effective as they really helped convey emotions, and tell the story (speaker 1). I was also told that the narrative was understood very well and this encouraged speaker 2 to feel intrigued enough to want to watch the whole movie. We also reflected back on how I improved my previous trailer and how that led me to achieve my final version.
  • 5. Due to technological convergence and advances It was a lot easier to reach to a lot of people at the same time globally. I for example used survey monkey to design and put together a survey which people had to fill in online so that I could find a potential focus group which would be suitable for my film. The link was put onto my WordPress and I also put flyers out in my school which had a QR code that directed them from their smartphones directly to it. The QR code is one example of technological advances simplifying communication as it is an efficient and up to date way of sharing information such as links.
  • 6. Apart from the Survey that I designed I also asked verbal feedback throughout the making of my media products, I did this to make sure that I was on the right track and this prevented me from drifting off. This also guided and helped me understand what was expected to be included in a promotional package, as I did struggle with this at the start of my media foundation portfolio.
  • 7. Continuation… Audience feedback specifically kept me on track when making drafts for my cover, I needed feedback from my audience so that I could then go on to design my final product including everything that people may have pointed out or commented on in my feedback. My verbal feedback included questions such as “Which of the three designs seems more suitable for a crime/fiction movie” and “Mention two things that you would add to this poster, if you don’t have any mention two things you feel stand out on this poster and why”
  • 8. One of the platforms used to ask for feedback was ‘FaceBook’ and because this is a frequently used one, including by my potential target audience since it is very wide spread, it was a useful attempt. Had I gotten any feedback then this would have helped me see if my work achieved its aim and suited the genre I had chosen for it, but I unfortunately did not receive any feedback.