From audience feedback on the print advert, documentary, and radio trailer, the group learned: 1) The print advert was effective with no needed changes, capturing attention with its blurred movement effect. 2) The documentary had a clear narrative, relevant interviews, and sound/shots that matched the interviews. However, narration volume needed increasing and some minor edits were suggested. 3) The radio trailer was successful at catching attention, having relevant clips, and linking to the documentary's narrative. The feedback indicated the three pieces worked well together to communicate a cohesive and professional final product. Minor adjustments were recommended to improve specific elements.

1. Question 3 – What have you learned
from your audience feedback?

2. From this question I have learned that the all the audience thought the print advert was
effective as it showed movement with the blurred effect, look professional in terms of
main image, logo size and position, title and caption were effective and correctly placed.
Knowing there was no negative feedback was helpful as it means we know that there are
no changes that need to be made to the print advert.

3. 86%
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What specific effect does the blurring effect create?
Movement Gets attention More interesting
The point of the question was to evaluate what specific effect the blurring had on the main
image to see whether the audience were happy with the effect and if it added more to the
image. 86% of the audience said the blurred effect created movement making the image
look more complicated. From this I learned that our print advert has a strong effect that
makes the image more interesting attracting more attention making it more successful.

4. Yes
No
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Is the main image strong enough to connote the narrative of
the documentary
From this question we learned that we have a successful print advert as the majority of
the audience voted that the image was strong enough to connote the narrative of the
documentary which is essential as if the main image of the print advert does not
connote what the narrative of the documentary is about then it will confuse and
mislead people. Also the main image needs to connote the narrative of the
documentary so the audience get a quick look at what they can expect to be in the
documentary.

5. Yes No
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Is it clear what the documentary is about from the title, tagline
and image?
From this piece of feedback I have learned that the Title, Tagline and image make it
obvious/clear what the documentary is about. Presumably this is because the main image
is a picture of people running, the title is “Race for Life” and the tagline is “The run to the
future”. All of those have clear connotations of running which is why we chose them to
place on the print advert.

6. Do the title and tagline work well together?
Yes No
The purpose of this question was to find out whether the audience felt the title and
tagline work well together. All the audience agreed and said that both did work well
together which is good as it means we have a title and tagline that come together to
create a harmonious combination which is memorable and catchy meaning people will
remember the title and tagline of the documentary and will want to watch it when it
comes on.

7. Yes
No
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Does the print advert get your attention?
From this question our group learnt that the questionnaire audience found that the
print advert caught their attention and drew them in. This is probably one of the most
important factors of a print advert as if it doesn’t catch people’s attention then they will
not be drawn to the documentary, title/tagline and scheduling so they will never find
out about the programme therefore they will not watch it making it unsuccessful.

8. Yes Category 2
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Do you like the black and white effect scheme of the print
advert?
Knowing that all of our audience like the black and white effect placed on the print advert is
good as it means that we have learned that our print advert is successful as it pleases the
audience and also that we do not need to make any changes to the effects on the print
advert.

9. Can you read the text properly?
yes no
The purpose of this question was too find out if the text on the print advert was
clear/bold and could be easily read by the audience when they are looking at the advert. I
learned that our text was very clear and bold meaning the audience could easily read it as
all of them voted that they could read it. Having text that can be read easily is essential on
a print advert as you want them to clearly see the title, tagling scheduling so they know
and remember the name of the documentary but also know what day and time it is on so
they don’t miss it.

10. Yes
No
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Do you think the BBC ONE logo, the tagline and title are in the
ideal position?
The purpose of this question was to find out if the “BBC ONE” logo, tagline and title were
in an ideal place making the print add look organised, professional, neat, realistic and like
an actual BBC ONE advert. All of the audience said that they did feel that everything was in
the correct/ideal position. From this I learned that the position of the logo, tagline and title
didn’t not need adjusting or moving as the audience are pleased with the layout.

11. Does the print advert look professional?
yes no
Knowing that all the audience said that the print advert looks professional is good as that is
an essential part of the print advert being successful as if it doesn’t look professional then
people will think it looks low quality and then not pay attention to the advert and therefore
will not watch the documentary. This also means that we do not have to change anything
on the print advert as has already been shown to an audience and they approve of it.

12. Yes No
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Do you think our documentary presents a strong narrative?
From this feedback I have learned that the majority of the audience bar one thinks that the
documentary presents a strong narrative so it is obvious throughout all times what the
documentary is about and what the point of it is. One member of the audience gave negative
feedback saying that the documentary didn’t present a strong narrative however they did not
expand and explain why therefore we cannot take this negative feedback into consideration
and make the changes we need to carry out to please them.

13. Do the interviews feel relevant to the narration?
yes no
From this feedback I have learnt that all of the audience felt that the interviews were
relevant to the narration meaning that we have a clear link and narrative throughout our
documentary making it organised and understandable.

14. Yes No
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Does the mise-en-scene correctly reflect the interview
being conducted?
The majority of the audience said that the mise-en-scene does correctly reflect the interview
being conducted which is essential as if the mise-en-scene is not linked to the spoken topic
then it will become confusing and the interview will look out of place making the
documentary look unorganised and not professional. However I did learn that 3 people from
the audience disagreed so we will need to require further feedback so we can adjust the
mise-en-scene to make it perfect and pleasing to everyone.

15. Yes
No
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Does the sound correctly reflect the interview being
conducted?
The point of this question was to find out whether the audience felt the sound correctly
reflected the interview being conducted.13/14 people agreed and said it did which is
good as it means that we have chosen sound that relates to the narrative/topic of the
interviews meaning there is a clear link and theme throughout the documentary. One
member of the audience gave negative feedback saying that the documentary didn’t
present a strong narrative however they did not expand and explain why therefore we
cannot take this negative feedback into consideration and make the changes we need to
carry out to please them.

16. Do the shot types work with each clip?
Yes no
Using the correct shot with each clip is key as you want to get the best angle, framing
and zoom to ensure you get everything you need fitted in and angled correctly so
knowing that all of the audience bar 1 said they thought that the shot types used work
with each clip is good as it means that we are sure we used the perfect shot for each clip
and that we do not need to alter any of the framing/angle of clips. One member of the
audience gave negative feedback saying that the documentary didn’t present a strong
narrative however they did not expand and explain why therefore we cannot take this
negative feedback into consideration and make the changes we need to carry out to
please them.

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What do you think of the overall documentary?
This was probably one of the most important and main questions from the questionnaire as
from this we learnt what the audience thought of our documentary overall. From the
feedback we found that the most of the audience said that it was good and
clear/understandable which is good as it means we have a documentary that is successful,
high quality and professional as it has been evaluated by an audience and it has pleased
them.

18. Make narration louder
Fix jump cuts
make camera less shakey
Add cutaway of movember run
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What do you think we should change to make it better?
Again this was one of the most important and main questions from the questionnaire as it is
essential to require constructive criticism from the audience so we know what we need to
improve on in our documentary to make it as good as it can be. The main piece of feedback
was that we needed to make narration louder so that it could be heard more clearly.
However there are a few other points that our group learnt need improving on in our
documentary including; more cutaways, making the camera work in places steadier and to fix
jump cuts.

19. What do you think of the overall radio trailer?
Good
Relevant clips
Links to
documentary
Catches attention
This was a general question to find out what the audience thought of the radio trailer.
From this we found out that the audience thought the radio trailer was good, caught their
attention, links to documentary and includes relevant clips. Knowing this is helpful as it
means we know we have created a successful and high quality trailer that does everything
a professional trailer would therefore we do not need to alter anything in our radio trailer.

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Do you think the soundtrack works with the theme?
From this feedback we found that the soundtrack of the radio trailer worked well with the
theme of the radio trailer meaning there is a clear link of the narrative throughout making
it organised and professional. Knowing this has helped us we now know that we have a
good soundtrack for the radio trailer and we do not need to change anything.

21. Yes
No
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Do you think the voiceover works with the area being discussed?
All of the audience agreed here and said that the voiceover works with the area being
discussed which is good as again it means there is a clear link of the narrative between the
voiceover and the discussed area making the radio trailer organised and professional. From this
the group has learnt that the voiceover is the best it could be and nothing needs changing.

22. From the radio trailer only what do you think the narrative of the
documentary is?
Running
Young people running
Technology in running
Benefits of running
This was another main question as the audience need to be able to easily tell what the
narrative of the documentary is so they know if it is something they would be interested in
watching or not. Also if the narrative is not clear the documentary will look unprofessional
and unorganised. All of the audience could clearly tell what the documentary is about from
the radio trailer meaning we have a clear and organised radio trailer that is successful.

23. Yes Category 2
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Does the trailer work as whole?
The point of this question was to understand whether the radio trailer worked as a whole
or not. All the audience said that the radio trailer did work as a whole which is good as now
we know that there is nothing that needs to be changed in the radio trailer and it is as good
as it can be.

24. Yes
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Do you think that all three pieces work together well?
This was the final question of the questionnaire as it’s purpose is to let us know whether
all three of our products work well together to create a strong, high quality and
professional range of products. From this we learned that all of the audience did think
that all the audience did think that all three products worked well together which is good
as it means we know that we have produced a range of products that all link and work
well together to create a high quality synergy.

25. To acquire further feedback I placed the documentary and print advert onto facebook to
allow friends to view and then provide feedback. From social media feedback I gained
positive comments from a few people. I learned that one person thought the documentary
had a strong narrative whilst being a “good documentary” in general. From putting the print
advert on facebook I learned that it had a “strong focus and clear link to the theme” which is
good as that is essential for a print advert. The advert was also labelled “sick”.